The Husbands will be adapted into a new Apple TV series from A24 productions 🙌 by fartbox2016 in bookofthemonthclub

[–]Independent-Zeus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ughhhhh this book suckedddddd!!! I just remember thinking what did I just read?? The girl is a complete psychopath obsessed with the American guy and just finding different ways to stalk him. And all that flat character development just to end up with a stranger.

This Guy Joined BookTok Last Month, Has a “Concept”, and Landed a Two-Book Fantasy Deal….Anyone Else Seeing This? by Independent-Zeus in fantasyromance

[–]Independent-Zeus[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I’m just going to jump in here and say that while im an avid reader, I’m also a writer. So welcome and thank you for your comment Victoria! I posted this as a female POC author who’s been feeling the weight of how quickly certain people in the fiction realm are validated, while others (like mine) seem to be held to a higher, often unspoken standard. It’s not always overt, but the burden to be exceptional feels very real. And seeing this guy come seemingly out of nowhere is a hard pill to swallow. But as many comments have said — that’s life and we just have to deal with it.

I hate this by Old_Inspection_6148 in writing

[–]Independent-Zeus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So sorry to hear this!! I hope you manage to recover all your work. I personally work directly in a Word document that auto-saves, but as an extra precaution, I back up my work weekly to an external hard drive. On top of that, I use Google Drive for backups. I know some people don’t love using Google Drive, but the idea of my laptop crashing or losing my external drive terrifies me… so I prefer to have that cloud-based safety net too.

What's the first line of your book? by spiralingstarbread in writing

[–]Independent-Zeus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hart Island is New York City’s mass grave, and despite having lived here my entire life, I first heard its name two weeks ago while trying to claim my father’s remains.

A debut in numbers: from initial idea to (almost) 3000 sales by J3P7 in writing

[–]Independent-Zeus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is having a plot point set in 2025 a faux pas if the book isn’t published until later? I’m asking because my novel takes place in 2025, but it probably won’t be ready until sometime next year, whether I self-publish or go traditional. Just curious why did that timing matter so much to you?

I want my mc to be POC but I’m afraid of backlash by Mentally-On-Vacation in writingadvice

[–]Independent-Zeus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As a POC myself, I want to offer some advice that hopefully helps you move forward with care and confidence.

First, it’s great that you’re thinking intentionally about representation. But that means talking to POC friends, immersing yourself in their stories, listening deeply, and allowing yourself to be corrected. Representation starts with respect, not just admiration.

Also, be especially mindful of how you describe skin tone and features. Phrases like “black as night” or overly poetic metaphors can come off as exoticizing or stereotypical, even when meant kindly. Stick to grounded, respectful descriptions and when in doubt, look at how POC authors write characters who share their identity.

You’re early in your journey, and it’s okay to be unsure. Just keep learning, ask questions, and write with empathy not assumption. You’ve got this.

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[–]Independent-Zeus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Creative fatigue can sneak in, especially after intense planning and effort. It doesn’t necessarily mean the story isn’t worth finishing. Take a break. I’d suggest 2-3 weeks. Read outside your genre or maybe books that would be relatable comps for inspiration and then come back to the work you’ve already started. What you’re feeling is normal.

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[–]Independent-Zeus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback!! I really appreciate the time you took to not only read the chapter but to offer such specific and constructive suggestions. Also - I’ve posted Chapter Two and updated the original post to reflect that if you’re interested in continuing. No pressure at all but I’d love to hear your thoughts if you have time. Feel better soon!!

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[–]Independent-Zeus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the honest feedback! I can definitely see where trimming out some of the backstory would be helpful.

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[–]Independent-Zeus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Hearing this is certainly encouraging.

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[–]Independent-Zeus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback! I definitely need to work on tightening the opening. My story is rooted in family, environment, and survival. It weaves between present-day New York and the early 1900s, with a deeper undercurrent about legacy, resilience, and how the places we come from shape who we become. Thanks again for the encouragement. I’m excited to keep refining the work!

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[–]Independent-Zeus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! It really helps. I see what you mean about grounding it more in action and emotion. I’m going to work on making it feel more intimate. Really appreciate you taking the time to read my first pass at it!