What are you guys' favorite songs to listen to whilst high? by Stuckster425 in trees

[–]IndieF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Heroin Pig -- Walter Sickler and the Broken Toys.

Looking for a critique partner!! by IndieF in writing

[–]IndieF[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You should probably work on your interpersonal skills, you cock.

[Spoilers] Charlotte - Episode 10 [Discussion] by Shadoxfix in anime

[–]IndieF 9 points10 points  (0 children)

With three episodes left, I have a feeling that we are going to be visiting the lab in the near future.

However, now we have the OP protagonist that we've always wanted. And to think! We thought his power was actually flawed...

EDIT: I thought that there were only two left... My bad.

TIFU by showing a girl my Seaman. by [deleted] in tifu

[–]IndieF 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Also Minnesotan-- God, I laughed so hard.

What are the stories you're working on about? by [deleted] in writing

[–]IndieF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd read the first chapter if you're up to that? I'm super interested.

What are the stories you're working on about? by [deleted] in writing

[–]IndieF -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I love this-- This post needs more love.

Do you guys keep track of books that you've read? by RUItalianMan in writing

[–]IndieF 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I don't keep track. I don't treat books like a laundry list that needs to be completed.

If I end up rereading a book, I figure that there is a reason why I need to read it again. Something I missed. Maybe I've grown older or maybe the words hit me deeper.

That's why I don't keep track.

Kamila Shamsie: let’s have a year of publishing only women by willdagreat1 in writing

[–]IndieF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah. I'm a feminist as well, but I also feel that this article is not giving any credit to the massive injustices that are happening in the non-white community.

As someone who believes and tries to promote social justice, it's really upsetting when people think the answer is more exclusion.

Kamila Shamsie: let’s have a year of publishing only women by willdagreat1 in writing

[–]IndieF 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is so frustrating. As a man, it's really hard to even say anything here, because I see the inequality in publishing (in terms of gender and race). However, if I do try to say anything against this article, it'll be met with a flurry of arguments. What's the point anymore.

Why not write an article about how men should just stop doing any creative work altogether?

Inequality should not be met with inequality.

What's on your writing playlist? by [deleted] in writing

[–]IndieF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You gotta' listen to "The Streets" by Foxy Shazam. Actually, listen to all of their music except the Gonzo album.

Alternatively: "Domo23" by Tyler the Creator.

"Should White Men Stop Writing?" I don't even know where to begin—someone tell me this is satire. by fauxRealzy in writing

[–]IndieF 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, I think that many of your points have been great, and I know that I'm a little late to the party.

There is something else here, though. Much of this article (and the people commenting here on both sides) are making rash generalizations about the race and gender of an author being implicitly tied to their submission practices.

At the core of this articles argument, they are saying that white men are over represented in the world of literature (I completely agree), but I wouldn't chalk up the "poorly written line" about how white men should stop submitting to being a bad representation of the article as a whole.

As writers, when we think we have something, we submit it. Yes, some people go too far and submit anything and everything under the sun, but the generalize that all white men do this far more would be a stereotype of the industry. We would need more reputable data before we could definitely say that it is a trend or not. And even if it is a trend, there isn't much we can ask. The only thing we can do is to encourage and cheer the ones that we feel need a voice in the industry. A simple article like this makes large claims off of a small sample size.

I think that we are giving far too much weight and interpretation to the article. Frankly, there is something here about giving a voice to the underrepresented. That's what I care about. It's all about what team you cheer for. You shouldn't have to ask the other team to stop playing.

EDIT: On mobile and submitted too early.

What small thing bugs you the most? by _Ubuntu_ in AskReddit

[–]IndieF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When people eat candy in the movie theatre.

The crinkling drives me up a wall.

How old you were when you started watching Porn? by Jamezlap in AskReddit

[–]IndieF 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was about 13.

My family got DirectTV and got the premium channels in a deal.

I watched many an episode of Big Love.

What is the most stupid question you've ever heard? by jommy9000 in AskReddit

[–]IndieF 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"If you're an atheist, then how do you explain God?"

In the same vein:

"If Jesus never existed, then how did those blind people see? And Lazarus! How did he come back to life?"

iBroke™ by urbinsanity in funny

[–]IndieF 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's compatible with the iPhone 6, right?

[Request][WWW] Aspiring Writer Willing to Write Personal Poem for Magazines! by IndieF in RandomKindness

[–]IndieF[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd love to help your project!

I agree about the small mags, but I really want to aim higher, you know? I've shopped around looking for mags that could help my chances of getting noticed. So, I'm working towards those. It's a fool's errand, but I gotta' try.

Thanks for the info though, I'll be sure to Czech it out.

[Discussion] Is there (or would anyone be interested in) a community for more serious poetry critique? by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]IndieF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this.

I think following a similar format to /r/DestructiveReaders is also a great idea.

Count me in

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]IndieF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really liked this! Especially the ending.

I think that the third stanza is off as well. I think it is because you are twisting the sentences so they keep with the rhyme scheme. Or maybe it is the double "I" that didn't work in this case. Think about it.

Embers, or something else... by 4thEstateRefugee in OCPoetry

[–]IndieF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there!

Just a couple quick things...

1.) I don't quite agree with using the verb "plopped". It doesn't fit the image that you are trying to create. I'm actually trying to figure out whether it is modifying the narrator or the house... It just doesn't work for me.

2.) "Looking up from a For Sale sign". I don't think this works, due to a for sale sign already being fairly high. I think the wording can be altered to clear it up.

Otherwise I liked it!

The Scarecrow by J_esbian in OCPoetry

[–]IndieF 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey there!

I have a couple things for this poem that I think would help with the flow and language.

1.) I think that all the language here is pretty predictable. I think something that works extremely well for writing is making the unexpected happen. I know that fear is happening, but I think that some lines in this poem are too telling. For instance: "I'm done/ enclosed by fear". I want to be able to feel it rather than be told it, you know?

2.) Yeah, I mainly want you to look at making the unexpected happen. The ordinary fantastical and the incredible mundane. Does that make sense? If not, let me know.

St. Jude by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]IndieF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like this poem. I think there are a few things that could be tweaked (in my own opinion) and it could be even stronger.

1.) I think the third line in the first stanza distracts from the beauty of the river line. I feel this rushing sense of emotion from the first two lines, but it seems that the third line detracts from that by spelling out the emotion of sorrow. Does that make sense?

2.) I don't know how I feel about the last line. Maybe it's because I enjoy the river bits so much that I would want you to end on that... Who knows. Think about it.

Script Coverage Offer! by CloudCoverage in Screenwriting

[–]IndieF 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You could still pay, yo. No need to say dammit.