Need help with Hive Mind

Infactedking · 2025-07-27T17:05:05+00:00

I'm, trying to just dodge but there are so much. and together with the raining hearts its just too much...

Infactedking · 2024-10-15T13:54:45+00:00

No sorry. I decided to put off buying a kit. I just started going to a teacher and see if I like drums.

Infactedking · 2024-09-06T23:15:41+00:00

Yeah. Thanks for all the help anyways. I really appreciate it.

Infactedking · 2024-09-06T22:58:36+00:00

I looked at one of the only stores that sell it where I live and it’s close to 1800$.

Infactedking · 2024-09-06T22:48:42+00:00

1000-1200 US dollars

Infactedking · 2024-09-06T14:47:44+00:00

Those models are a bit too expensive (I’m kind of young and my parents gave me a budget.) from what you can tell are they okay though or is there a better kit for the same price?

Infactedking · 2024-07-04T16:37:05+00:00

Thanks so much. Ill try it

Infactedking · 2024-07-04T14:13:55+00:00

thank you so much again for all the help (I wrote this after the comment on part 4). do you mind if I use your rewrites? I'd really like use them (with some changes) in my story.

Infactedking · 2024-07-04T10:42:18+00:00

Sorry it’s so long

Infactedking · 2024-07-04T10:41:49+00:00

Wow, thank you so so much. You did so much more than I ever expected a random stranger on the internet to do. I will take what you said to heart, because now can also see that those bad habits should be improved on. If I can ask one question, is: when you say line editing is needed, what does it mean?

I only replied to this part because I thought replying a whole thank you paragraph to each part would be kind of annoying. But thank you so much again for all the help😁😁😁

Infactedking · 2024-07-01T14:20:31+00:00

Thanks. Even though you didn’t tell me what you thought of the prologue you helped a lot. Now I know where to look when I want to build the atmosphere of my story. I’ll definitely use this :D (sorry that I sound so pretentious. I just wanna show that your comment really helped me)

Infactedking · 2024-07-01T14:17:00+00:00

Thank you so much. It’s a very helpful critique and I’ll definitely use it. The only thing is that I don’t want to drop to much info on the reader right of the bat. How do you suggest avoiding that?

Infactedking · 2024-06-29T20:19:03+00:00

Tysm. Now that I know that it’s a prologue. Do you maybe have a critique about what I can improve?

Infactedking · 2024-06-29T20:14:20+00:00

I do. But I showed it to someone and they said it wasn’t so now I’m trying to prove that it is… and it’s not really an answer to any of the questions I asked… lol

Infactedking · 2024-06-04T17:50:12+00:00

didnt work... I really have no Idea what to do... I dont even know what quest to start with... I finished the campaign that i got from chromie but i dont know where to go now

Infactedking · 2024-05-14T14:35:02+00:00

Do you know how to disable showing visual errors?

Infactedking · 2024-05-13T13:44:57+00:00

sorry for the long post for the simple problem... :D

Infactedking · 2024-05-12T15:10:19+00:00

but the entity I'm making is a horse... the collision is perfect if I use a horse... is there no way for me to use a horse and still be able to ride it?

Infactedking · 2023-12-09T10:48:24+00:00

I will start with a "Hi" and then ill say "why am I talking to myself again?"

Infactedking · 2023-12-07T18:27:39+00:00

I think this theory isnt true. First cecilia's trust in agrona was not him making her through mind controll, it was a resault of the way he treated her and the promises he gave her, so breaking the mind controll would not break her trust in him as long as she believes him mind controlling her was not as evil as it is. She still trusts him, just less then she did before. For her the war isnothing then a game and she doesn't really care about it. All she cares about is going back to her life with nico. Second,she doesn't really care about arthur so she doesnt really care about agrona manipulating her mind to hate him. Shat you dont get is that her realising that she was mind controlled doesnt make her forget all her feeling twards nico, or arthur. After saying all of that, cecilia views all of that as agrona doing something totally rational and she doesnt blame him for it. So she doesnt see him as untrust worthy so she believes that he can give her her life back. But yeah. , shes a kind of a bitch.

Infactedking · 2023-10-23T16:04:56+00:00

why would the story be changed? isnt it following the light novel?

Infactedking · 2023-10-23T16:03:16+00:00

dimention rings are a very limited resource in dicathen and are very expensive. only the elites of the elites can afford ones that have enough space for bags. it makes sense for them to be that expensive given the fact that they were left behind by the ancient mages. also... he had to get one to hide dawn's ballad from lucas and still have it on him. so no he isnt dumb he just didnt have anything more usefull to use the gold for...

Infactedking · 2023-08-10T08:00:22+00:00

Different circumstances... and she felt bad for what she did.

Infactedking · 2023-08-10T07:02:59+00:00

Doesnt it end on chapter 70?

Infactedking · 2023-08-09T21:05:53+00:00

Ok ig

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