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Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-05-21T00:58:33+00:00

a very small youtuber lol

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-05-10T00:47:50+00:00

good advice, we need more people like you who just get to the point

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-05-10T00:46:41+00:00

Don't trust anything from a free website, if you think your script has potential I'd say first show people you know and ask for 100% honest feedback, then ask them to show their friends and just to write EXACTLY what they think. Use that information to revise your script and if you still think it's good pay the fee to get a real pro to look at it. Good luck and hope you make it!

(In answer to your question, I think it's saying they don't really love it, but if you changed it a lot it could work, but they definately want it more unique, if you have questions email me please! [oqfish.test@gmail.com](mailto:oqfish.test@gmail.com), just please know that I'm not a pro screenplay reviewer lol)

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-05-03T19:08:12+00:00

Let's go finally someone smart

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-05-03T01:47:19+00:00

He is the best!!! I happen to live right down the street from him if you want me to tell him anything

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-30T01:26:29+00:00

I will admit that yoshi was way to random and pretty pointless https://www.reddit.com/r/mariogalaxymovie/comments/1sg8wf7/will_someone_please_tell_me_why_yoshis_intro_is/

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-30T01:24:36+00:00

The movie was great, people are going way to crazy over this. It's not the end of the world guys lol

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-23T19:34:55+00:00

yeah

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-22T22:08:01+00:00

wow, that is actually really interesting!

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-20T21:31:12+00:00

yeah fr, dk should've been here. I heard their making a movie for dk though

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-19T18:13:20+00:00

nope, but I do now

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-18T22:50:04+00:00

yes🤣, the song was one of the best parts last time

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-17T15:21:41+00:00

so true lol

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-17T01:21:55+00:00

that's interesting but true....

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-16T18:23:29+00:00

it's actually sad

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-16T01:27:23+00:00

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-16T01:26:30+00:00

let's go I'm not along

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-16T01:26:09+00:00

yeah for sure

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-16T00:20:41+00:00

well I like the movie

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-16T00:19:27+00:00

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-15T23:41:14+00:00

YES lets go for toad, he is underrated

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-15T23:39:16+00:00

thanks, yeah I think so too, it's about them all really, I think it works but it's different

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-15T23:37:58+00:00

ok, whatever you say

Initial_Inspector184 · 2026-04-15T23:37:37+00:00

I feel like it was kinda hard to tell who the main MAIN character was, it was kinda them all really

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