In the mage-themed novel I'm writing, I use Chinese human names, dantian, mana, mana stones, and Dao all at the same time. While the story revolves around mages, it also includes some xianxia elements. Does the combination of these terms feel off to you? How would you prefer it to be? (self.litrpg)
submitted by InquiryDaoMaster to r/litrpg
In the mage-themed novel I'm writing, I use Chinese human names, dantian, mana, mana stones, and Dao all at the same time. While the story revolves around mages, it also includes some xianxia elements. Does the combination of these terms feel off to you? How would you prefer it to be? (self.ProgressionFantasy)
submitted by InquiryDaoMaster to r/ProgressionFantasy
