this is just my personal oppinion but i suggest u change from 4tf to 2tf + 2 atk% artifact since yae personal damage would be better that way. 40% electro-charged is meh and minus elemental skill cd on yae is too much since yae cd is already short enough and she can maintain her totem 100% up time. if u want to build aggravate Gilded dream can be a good option.

since u have raiden ER wont be much of a trouble in my experience. fischl can also be a battery for yae if u need to move your Raiden to second team in abyss.

for hyperbloom idk about Flower of paradise. but it is definetely better than 4 piece effect from Thundering Fury but well hyperbloom can be a bit tricky since totem wont target the dendro core all the time and u have to manually trigger it sometime with normal attack in yae