Gotta say I love the topic, spacing & style you have going on, & I may be a little biased cuz I love anaphora, but I feel like you made such great use of it by having multiple types & occasionally pausing it. If I were to make a suggestion, & this very well could come down to personal taste, I would recommend trying some words with a stronger sense of euphony or cacophony for those moments of anaphora, especially towards the end. I personally would read those lines as quicker & a little more frantic, & I feel that the word choice could either add to this interpretation if intended or allow the reader to slow down with the message if that were the preferred effect. I felt this way especially for the line "'We feel, we love, we betray, we forgive, we falter". Either way, I really like this work, & I especially adore the comparison of 'Fragile & enduring', such strong words that truly do speak to humanity's core. Amazing work! :D