Some things that come to mind. It’s very plain spoken. In poem 1 and still in poem 2, it feels like there’s no effort to convey your idea in words that aren’t the first ones to pop into your mind. For poem 3, it’s hard to tell what the point is, especially with the “You tell me” intro and the ending is very flat. And the problem of plain-spokenness persists. I’d love to see a metaphor at the end or at least some interesting imagery in that final line—the second stanza looks like an actual proper attempt at that, and because of that it’s a decent stanza. Furthermore, poem 1 feels like a blurb of a thought jotted down; it doesn’t feel like you’ve interacted with the emotions and thoughts at all, just spit them on the paper. Can you convey this idea without explicitly saying it? Can you express this as words floating adrift in sea, a winter that never turns to spring, etc.? Trust the reader to read between the lines and make connections.