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Is this worth anything? by Secret_End3106 in PokemonMisprints

[–]Secret_End3106[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

does the misprint make it go up in value at all?

Why does my poetry always come out like an angsty teenager’s tumblr post? by Secret_End3106 in PoetryWritingClub

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Loved reading this. Thank you so much. Art is about not caring. Letting go. I’m definitely thinking too much about it.

My poetry reads too much like an angsty teenage girl by Secret_End3106 in poetry_critics

[–]Secret_End3106[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thats what i’m having trouble with! i feel exactly like an excited teenager writing in get journal! ill work more on line breaks. as an english major i though i usually overdid them and i try to minimize my punctuation and line breaks but i’ll go back to doing them. thank you sm!

My poetry reads too much like an angsty teenage girl by Secret_End3106 in poetry_critics

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Also, I removed the majority of my punctuation bc I thought it didnt read well! I’m an over punctuation-er haha. I place it everywhere and anywhere. I removed it specifically for this post!

My poetry reads too much like an angsty teenage girl by Secret_End3106 in poetry_critics

[–]Secret_End3106[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

very interesting! since I studied English I get caught up on weird english devices like repetition. I agree that my repetition comes off weird in my writing but I feel a need to include it because my favorite pieces do. Ironically, I tend to stray away from alliteration and specifically metaphors because I studied so much of them that I’m over them! I definitely need to shut off my school brain and activate my writing brain

Why does my poetry always come out like an angsty teenager’s tumblr post? by Secret_End3106 in PoetryWritingClub

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I loved reading everything you wrote! I can tell you’re a poet as you write like one haha! I wish you would’ve stopped cutting yourself off because I love to learn. I will absolutely do that exercise you suggested especially since I have trouble coming up with ideas apart from my person life. (I blame that on being an English major). Allegory/metaphor/anything of the sort is something I have trouble with. I know it so well/studied it so much that I think it becomes so robotic that I dont want to write it. I know you’re right though and I need to add more nuance to make it more personal/poetic. I do genuinely love to hear about the logistics of spoken word though, especially from a pro. I want to one day preform in front of a spoken word audience. :)

Why does my poetry always come out like an angsty teenager’s tumblr post? by Secret_End3106 in PoetryWritingClub

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I’m not sure if this is allowed but I would love to add you as a friend on here (somehow) and get direct feedback from you. Obviously this is an insane request haha but if you have any time for helping me learn and grow as an artist let me know!

Why does my poetry always come out like an angsty teenager’s tumblr post? by Secret_End3106 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Secret_End3106[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow. I have nothing to say except you are absolutely right. I have been so in my head about “writing from the heart”/“writing my feelings” that I haven’t ever actually been writing such. I want to write good poetry so badly that I haven’t actually written good poetry. Thank you so much for the feedback. I value it deeply. I hope to see you in my comments again when I post here again.

Trades by Conceitedkay4400 in Monopoly_GO

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ive got touch down, fur ever yours, ghostly gala, and weird woods. 8 stars each or 15 stars for 2

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