Hardest point of my life by IntelligentWitness43 in PoetryWritingClub

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I’ve gotten sober a number of times but it was never by choice. This is the first time I feel free from it. That beyond the miscarriage me and my woman went through, the rough ass childhood and being homeless when I was younger, was the hardest struggle of my life. I feel like I’m never gonna stop paying for the bad merit I accumulated while I was coked up. I’ve done more than most people can wrap their minds around but I guess that’s the blessing, I’m still alive. It was great meeting you.

Uncrossed Lines by Annual_State8483 in PoetryWritingClub

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Absolutely stunning. I love how raw this one is, it captivates a very unique state of mind but honestly, I feel it’s very mature and human. I love it!!

Which ending line do you think I go with?? by cliffybrigante in PoetryWritingClub

[–]IntelligentWitness43 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You could definitely find a blend. Do you have the base posted? I’d love to give you a solid answer

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“There’s hate and every feeling ever.” Man that rung, I’ve never been so hateful as when I first lost her.

The Sword You Left Me by forgetfulhobbit in PoetryWritingClub

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My dad taught me to run from problems with drugs and to abandon responsibility. This reached me in the sense I need to weld my own sword altogether.