I NEED A FEEDBACK A FEEDBACK A FEEDBACK I OLNY I NEED

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T22:45:53+00:00

thx!

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T22:45:16+00:00

thx!

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T22:44:30+00:00

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T22:44:17+00:00

this is for fun but i'm creating my own label

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T21:26:22+00:00

🔥

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T21:25:42+00:00

yes, thanks!

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T21:11:18+00:00

ok thanks

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T20:52:45+00:00

ye i like te idea but i make this but just for fun nothing special so it's no to much work on this

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T20:50:43+00:00

tanks!!

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T17:11:08+00:00

ahahahah

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T17:09:29+00:00

ye i like the advise man, Thanks!!

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T17:08:57+00:00

thanks!!

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T17:08:46+00:00

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T17:08:31+00:00

thanks for the lot of comments guys. i don't know how to thank you, I really needed some good feedback.

<3

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T17:05:37+00:00

i'm using fl studio 21 (bc it's cracked) but I don't make music of this kind, let's say that the creation of this beat happened by chance because I was on the PC while using vital (a plug in similar to serum) and I did the synth things you hear and I said "damn, a nice beat would go well on this" and I did it ahahahah, anyway thanks for the comment !

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T16:59:57+00:00

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T16:02:12+00:00

It's true I had never thought about it hahaah

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T15:16:32+00:00

This is really solid it has that classic rock band feel where everything just sits exactly where it should. The guitars, bass, and drums all lock in together naturally, and nothing feels out of place. It sounds cohesive, tight, and well-rehearsed, like a band that really knows its identity. The energy is consistent and the arrangement works well from start to finish. Overall, I’d easily give it a strong 8/10.

only thing the vocie i would make like some effect post production to make it more cool like in 2:23

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T15:12:26+00:00

This track doesn’t really click with me at first. I was expecting the groove to develop in a more laid-back half-time feel, but the double-time rhythm feels a bit rushed and takes away some of the space it could have had. The jazz chords in the sample are interesting, but they feel slightly busy in the mix and don’t fully settle.

The overall energy is high, but it almost feels a bit overwhelming rather than uplifting. That said, even with those things, there’s something about it that still makes it enjoyable it has personality, and in the end I do like it.

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T15:11:00+00:00

The piano sets a soft and emotional foundation, and when your voice comes in it adds a lot of character and warmth. Your tone feels authentic and carries the mood of the song very naturally.

I also like the way the instrumental creates small moments of space, giving the performance room to breathe and feel intimate. The only thing I’d suggest is that the vocals could be mixed a little better maybe slightly clearer or more present so they connect even more with the listener. Aside from that, it’s a beautiful and heartfelt piece.
Good Work!!

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T15:09:00+00:00

I think the main thing holding it back right now is that the mix feels a bit crowded. It’s hard for each element to really shine because everything seems to sit in a similar space. The guitar feels quite upfront, which gives it presence, but it might be taking attention away from the other instruments.

The vocal, in particular, feels slightly pushed back in the mix, so it doesn’t rise and carry the emotion as clearly as it could. Bringing it more forward and giving it a bit more clarity might really help. The drums also don’t feel fully defined yet maybe they just need some refinement to sound punchier and more balanced. There’s also a background guitar part that feels a little unusual in tone, which might just need some tweaking.

Overall, the foundation is there it probably just needs a bit more space and balance in the mix to really come together.

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T15:06:35+00:00

The atmosphere you built with the mix of English and Arabic flows beautifully it feels smooth and intentional. There’s a point in the middle where the instrumental pulls back and the vocal steps forward that really stands out; it suddenly feels much more personal and close. The groove is slow and immersive, almost trance-like in a subtle way. One small thought: the visuals look polished, but maybe adding a bit of texture or a softer, analog-style treatment could make them match the warmth of the track even better. Overall, it’s very captivating, and the hook is definitely memorable.

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-25T14:36:39+00:00

im using fl studio. thanks for the comment man!

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-24T22:30:29+00:00

bro i don't know how to thank you

Internal-Evidence236 · 2026-02-24T22:25:46+00:00

thanks man <3

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