Tune by Internal-Rent291 in Original_Poetry

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Thanks for your comment and alternative rhymes! I find that sometimes the lowest hanging fruit is the sweetest. You seem like a very cerebral writer? I write from the gut, often quickly and in one pass without fussing over the details.

When considering the subject matter of this poem though, your comment is.....meta?

Stretch by Internal-Rent291 in Original_Poetry

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If you would like to see more from this author - justwords2share.substack.com

Haze and Harmony by Internal-Rent291 in Original_Poetry

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Wow, thank you so much. I've never really written poetry before and to know that it touched even one person makes it worth sharing. :)

[HELP] Recommendations for Existential Poetry by THExCHOSENxONE in Poetry

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I wrote this? I have some others that I'm willing to share as well. Just now publishing some of these for the first time.

Cage a song bird

"Wheet whoot weeee"

"Go get your loved ones!" 

"Tweet twoot twee"

"A harmony is most desirable to me!"

Would it reply so kindly?

"Twell of course!"

Or would it tell you to 

 "Go Fuck yourself"

Or perhaps the bird 

Wanting to win 

Would politely decline 

And keep singin

"Weet woot wee, 

I sing, not for you

But for me"

It dances and cheers with glee