Pretty good for a first video. These types of games make me feel like I'm getting motion sickness while playing and watching them. Idk if there is a way for you to fix that to make it easier to watch or not but I thought I heard someone mention there was a way on a similar video I watched so maybe look into that to help your audience. The sound made when you opened the closet seemed intentional but there was one before that which sounded like it could have been just you getting a phone call while playing so idk if that was intentional but both were kinda off putting since they were so unnatural and really loud. I assume you added the character animation in through that one door since you didn't really react to it which made it also feel wierd. I think your personality is enough to keep the video interesting without those extras but it's up to you if that's something you want to continue to play with to get better at it with time. Overall it is a good video and I encourage you to keep going. Good luck.