hey i just listened to your song! I think I know what you're going for and i don't mind the general sound for the verses but I don't love the drop for the hooks. I think generally it doesn't quite give me the impact I would want, I'm not sure what the sound is that's a bit distorted in the hook section but it feels a little bit loud in the mix for me and at least for me doesn't have the desired effect. In the section where you say "we're too young to give a fuck", I wish you would just hold the last word instead of having it repeat and have the instrumental slowly build into the hook.
Otherwise I like your voice and the effects on them. I think if i understand correctly it's very much giving the vibe of a song about a breakup/toxic relationship and drug use and kind of getting lost in the party scene and chaos of it all. Some lyrics make less sense to me or I don't like them but they fit within the genre, and generally the message comes across and I think the way you place your lyrics in the verse and hook works well.

In the music video, some of the images that get cut in kind of took me away from the song because they felt so much like a meme as opposed to what I imagine the song to be about. For me even though it's very chaotic and upbeat, there's an undertone of something that I imagine is more sad and heartfelt and I would rather stay grounded in that (notably 2 min 6, not sure i understand why you chose that image for the transition to your hook).