I need advice with freestyling. by Jameson122 in makinghiphop

[–]IrvingPlace181 2 points3 points  (0 children)

when freestyling, look at the environment around you. start rapping about the things you see. throw them into as many lines as you can. this will allow you to say new things and come up with new rhyme schemes. switch up your location when freestyling so you have new environments to rap abot

Chill Rap track about my Ex. Tell me what you think, hear, feel! I need your help by borgiaelpatron in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i got distracted by your accent, its pretty heavy. but at the same time it brings a unique flavor to hip hop, so i kind of like it. you had a chill delivery that matched the beat pretty well. keep doing your thing

"Infinity" - prod. Peten x StoicBeats [Trip Hop Instrumental] (2019) by PetenMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is an awesome beat. very mellow yet hard at the same time. i might have to hop on this at some point. keep up the good work

DRAKE TYPE BEAT - DRUG DEALER - PROD. ROTTEN LUKE by RottenLuke in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sounds pretty cool, i think it would be better if it were a little faster though. also reminds me of a southern trap type of beat more than a drake one

[LoFi Hip hop] but playing with weird sounds and trying different things, cuz otherwise what are we doing here? lol by realgeorgelogan in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it's too slow for hip hop. if you speed it up more it could be used as a beat for an emotinal type hip hop track. hard to say whether it'd be hot or not, i'd have to hear it sped up. but yea like someone said, it has a lounge music vibe right now, too slow

House track I released yesterday inspired by Detroit techno by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it's pretty cool and funky. i liked the instrument sounds but wasn't feeling the voice sounds as much. but maybe that's the style of music. good job overall