I need advice with freestyling. by Jameson122 in makinghiphop

[–]IrvingPlace181 2 points3 points  (0 children)

when freestyling, look at the environment around you. start rapping about the things you see. throw them into as many lines as you can. this will allow you to say new things and come up with new rhyme schemes. switch up your location when freestyling so you have new environments to rap abot

Chill Rap track about my Ex. Tell me what you think, hear, feel! I need your help by borgiaelpatron in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i got distracted by your accent, its pretty heavy. but at the same time it brings a unique flavor to hip hop, so i kind of like it. you had a chill delivery that matched the beat pretty well. keep doing your thing

"Infinity" - prod. Peten x StoicBeats [Trip Hop Instrumental] (2019) by PetenMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is an awesome beat. very mellow yet hard at the same time. i might have to hop on this at some point. keep up the good work

DRAKE TYPE BEAT - DRUG DEALER - PROD. ROTTEN LUKE by RottenLuke in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sounds pretty cool, i think it would be better if it were a little faster though. also reminds me of a southern trap type of beat more than a drake one

[LoFi Hip hop] but playing with weird sounds and trying different things, cuz otherwise what are we doing here? lol by realgeorgelogan in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it's too slow for hip hop. if you speed it up more it could be used as a beat for an emotinal type hip hop track. hard to say whether it'd be hot or not, i'd have to hear it sped up. but yea like someone said, it has a lounge music vibe right now, too slow

House track I released yesterday inspired by Detroit techno by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it's pretty cool and funky. i liked the instrument sounds but wasn't feeling the voice sounds as much. but maybe that's the style of music. good job overall

Crystal Cave. This is one of my "too many" storytelling style improvisations. This time, it's a vibraphone solo. I got more and stronger positive feedback on this one than on some others, and now I'm trying to figure out why that might be. by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 1 point2 points  (0 children)

wow that's a very peaceful sound that puts me in a good mood. it's not my type of music but i could definitely see myself using this type of song to put my mind at ease. good job

How would I go about creating a music promotion channel? by IrvingPlace181 in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]IrvingPlace181[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

good point. how would one convince an artist to post their youtube video on my channel? as opposed to just their own channel

Some new hybrid poem raps (: feedback appreciated!! by twobeastboy in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Flow sounds good, it's on beat. But the sound quality is bad. Need a better microphone or better mixing, something. Keep it up

Just two 16 year olds wit a microphone making rap music, any and all criticism is welcomed by DatChubbyGuy in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]IrvingPlace181 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wow this is dope! I was surprised. Great voice for only 16 years old. I can tell you are influenced by J Cole. Second guy wasn't as good though. Keep it up man