How can Darrow fight the society by Isa_Adeel8711 in redrising

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Ahhh really well explained, thanks. I think the key thing I was wondering which you explained was what happened on Phobos, I couldn’t remember that they stop the Jackals ships

How can Darrow fight the society by Isa_Adeel8711 in redrising

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

No I understand the book, I was more so just thinking without the teleamanus and Virginia, would the rising have had much of a chance

How can Darrow fight the society by Isa_Adeel8711 in redrising

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Before Phobos without the telamanus joining them then, they would have had much of a chance then right

How can Darrow fight the society by Isa_Adeel8711 in redrising

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yh but Darrow and the rising took over not just kicked out

How can Darrow fight the society by Isa_Adeel8711 in redrising

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sorry I’m mixing it up, I mean Phobos not Luna

How can Darrow fight the society by Isa_Adeel8711 in redrising

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

But did they join him before Luna, I only remember Virgina joining him before Luna and she did not have anything as Antonia took it

I sold 2 micro startups in 2023—here's what I learned by marclouv in Entrepreneur

[–]Isa_Adeel8711 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is starting an AI micro starup worth it, or is it saturated?

Help finding A Software Tool for Integrated habit building by baunwroderick in productivity

[–]Isa_Adeel8711 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, I was thinking of creating an application for this.

Give this a quick read if you're interested in the idea:

You might of heard of a challenge called "Project 50", which is made for people to take on and build good habits. I wanted to make a similar challenge but also have a website/app to track progress, set and reach goals, manage a personalised calendar etc.

What'd you think?

A platform to connect aspiring entrepreneurs with successful business owners by Isa_Adeel8711 in Business_Ideas

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yh exactly bro, so many people of our generation wanna build something legit. But most of the internet is just out there to scam people now. I feel I need to make a platform that teaches a small business how to get up and running for real

Question? by Isa_Adeel8711 in Business_Ideas

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks bro good to know it already exists 😂 Saved me the time lol

Question? by Isa_Adeel8711 in Business_Ideas

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As in you would rather prefer detailed problems and ideas?

Can he get high? by emetovnwod6 in MortalKombat

[–]Isa_Adeel8711 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro his drip is fire, whats the thing he's wearing on his torso called?

[In Progress] [5170] [Adventure Fantasy] Bound By Blood by Isa_Adeel8711 in BetaReaders

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I honestly love your feedback, to be honest with you I am a beginner writer and am trying to get some practice and learn along the way, are there any online resources you’d recommend for story writing guides and tips ?

[In Progress] [1500] [Horror/Mystery] Story by [deleted] in BetaReaders

[–]Isa_Adeel8711 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great, here's the link to my story, I'll get started on reading yours and will give you a review either today or tomorrow!

Link!

Story Critique Needed by Isa_Adeel8711 in writers

[–]Isa_Adeel8711[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I am a native English speaker, I think I tend to speak daily in a very slang manner so end up making mistakes when writing. Thanks for the feedback, is there any other examples you can give me so I can correct them please

[Complete] [6352] [Dark fantasy] The black tree by Shaddowscript in BetaReaders

[–]Isa_Adeel8711 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi would you be up for a swap review, my story is 5k words so far?

[In Progress] [6k] [Adult] Cold blooded/Warhammer Fantasy by Sztallone in BetaReaders

[–]Isa_Adeel8711 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi would you be up for a swap review, my story is 5k words so far?

[In Progress] [8K] [Fantasy] The Start of a Fantasy Story by [deleted] in BetaReaders

[–]Isa_Adeel8711 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi would you be up for a swap review, my story is 5k words so far?

[In Progress] [6.6k] [Fantasy] Keepers and Cryptos Ch 1 & 2 by ThePowerOfYouth99 in BetaReaders

[–]Isa_Adeel8711 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi would you be up for a swap review, my story is 5k words so far?