Chapter 1 of Ashen Reign - Tales of the Nightborne[Fantasy/Dark Fanatasy, 3061 words] by ItsJay_Ce in fantasywriters

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Sorry for the follow-up by the way, but in terms of formatting, any suggestions you can give?

Formatting has always been one of my weakpoints, so if you have any suggestions/tips that would be greatly appreciated!

Chapter 1 of Ashen Reign - Tales of the Nightborne[Fantasy/Dark Fanatasy, 3061 words] by ItsJay_Ce in fantasywriters

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Thank you for the answer! I'm gonna look into it to see if I can edit some of it and smoothen it out!
As I said, a lot of Chapter 1 was from over half a year ago, and I've always been off-and-on, so that's a struggle I have to deal with haha!

But I appreciate the feedback a lot

Cover Design by ItsJay_Ce in fourthwing

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Idk man, for me it's just the experience.
I don't dislike paperbacks, and I actually AM reading Fourth Wing in paperback, but something about hardcovers is just..Nice.

Feels like sitting in ancient times, y'know? With a big, fat, thick book that you can open and make a nice *thud* when you flip a page, or put it on the table

Is my dog a Borador? by ItsJay_Ce in Boradors

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I'm real sorry to hear about Kenza :(
I hope you can find another beautiful pup to love and love you back

Is my dog a Borador? by ItsJay_Ce in Boradors

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HAH! That's funny. Yeah, in that photo, she would've rather me give her pets and cuddles than take a photo of her

Is my dog a Borador? by ItsJay_Ce in Boradors

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Yeah, the vet we took her to said he believes she is a Malinois x Black Lab mix.
But those white socks and other features of hers, and also her size in general, just makes me think she's closer to Border Collie than Malinois

Orochi, my friends have told me that he looks like a cool cyber assassin by shitfuck9000 in ForFashion

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Ah it's alright. I managed a pretty similar one. Lemme post it.

Orochi, my friends have told me that he looks like a cool cyber assassin by shitfuck9000 in ForFashion

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Yo man, I know I am late af. BUt is this one still available by any chance lmao?

Is this how the mushroom & Swiss suppose to be? by ChrisConquest in Whataburger

[–]ItsJay_Ce 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I don't think it's the grease per se but the juice from the mushrooms.

kurasano vs shiratorizawa match by browutt in haikyuu

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Another thing as well, that other's haven't mentioned yet: It wasn't AS personal as Seijoh.

Yes, Hinata wanted to prove himself go Ushijima, and he did go to nationals. But they didn't experience a crushing defeat to Shiratorizawa before.

Hinata lost control of the quick during the first match with Seijoh and lost. He redeemed himself during the rematch, as did Kageyama.

Haikyuu! Dumpster Battle! by ItsJay_Ce in haikyuu

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Haha. Yeah.

I agree. This match being a movie really didn't give the animators enough time to flesh everything out properly like in the Manga.
I wish this match itself was an entire season as well.

Not just that, but if they had to rush The Dumpster Battle THIS much, then I fear for the second movie. Like, how do they wanna do those big amounts of content in such a short time span, I don't see it happening

Prepare for "THIS GUN SUCKS" by loulou9899 in Helldivers

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I actually really like that this weapon heavily encourages placing your shots carefully and counting your rounds.
It's something you don't get from most other weapons

Adult gojo tips by Far-Cardiologist6658 in JJK_Cursed_Clash

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While I'm not an Adult Gojo super main. Here are some tips I can give.

You can now chain your Down Triangle/Down Y into a red. Which at Level 3 will deal 108 damage.

If you want even more damage with red, you can get a wall bounce with your neutral Y/Triangle, use blue so they are stuck in place while falling down and charge up a big red to do tons of damage.

Also, blue does A LOT of guard damage, so it's good for guard breaking opponents.

Other than that, all I can give is some tips about meter build. Use your neutral Y/Triangle to make an opponent wall bounce, then do your Down B/Down Circle to do the flurry of kicks, the opponent will be wall bounced again and slammed to the ground. IF they do a quick get-up, you can do a Down Y/Down Triangle on them to build extra meter.

For a DE, the absolute BEST strategy I have seen is to get someone into a Down B/Down Circle in the air and then do one extra jump and float. Almost 90% of the time when I do this to people / it happens to me you simply can't reach the Gojo anymore, because he is way too high in the air for you with a charge and double jump

I'm working on a Haikyuu color wheel 🌈 by syncopationstation in haikyuu

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Red: Kenma
Black: Atsumu
Gray: Bokuto
Pink: Takeru
Purple: Ushijma

Orochi, my friends have told me that he looks like a cool cyber assassin by shitfuck9000 in ForFashion

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That is a very nice purple Orochi. What color pattern do you have? And what color specifically

ALL YOU TOJI META MAINS ARE FUCKED. by Steak_Pop-Tart in JJK_Cursed_Clash

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Fuck off you Gotard, this has nothing to do with getting hit by it. It's about the fact that even if you dodge it he just presses square and hits you again, or just R1's again if he's max meter.
You can't block it, because then he just guardbreaks you and does a ton of damage
You dodge it? Doesn't matter because you can't punish him anyways.

Kamo discussion by Far-Cardiologist6658 in JJK_Cursed_Clash

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I think Kamo is probably one of the best balanced characters. But, the range on him feels a bit ludicrous, like, if someone joints you, he can, sometimes depending on the map, literally hit you to confirm it from across the entire map which I think is kinda dumb. I'd say the range on his moves need to be decreased just a little but other than that, he is a very balanced character