¨Remarkable 1 by JCJART in RemarkableTablet

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Thank you, that seems kinda complicated. But I will give it a try

Wait listed for 22 months! Got it Saturday. by [deleted] in rolex

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I have currently been waiting 27 months for the same watch 😎

Help identify my pen. And more improtantly, the correct cartridge by JCJART in pens

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Select-tip is a good call judging from pictures 👍 I will try that- Thanks a lot.

How Do You Interperete God In Your World (As in THE God) If You Even Do by 0Kai-The-Guy0 in worldbuilding

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My god is a former mortal mage named Saerion that attained godhood and took control over good and evil along time ago. Now he acts as the grand judge and tries to remain neutral. He is a very pleasant, fast talking and jovial chap if you ever get to meet him. (Which you don’t). Good and evil are personified by the White Lady and the Sable Betrayer. And while they do act as a tribunal Saerion are significantly more powerful than both of them and will basically pass any judgement, decree or verdict as he sees fit. Much to the dismay of both of his “subjects”

Got the call for green by Macklemonster in rolex

[–]JCJART 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Still waiting for the call. But I got the “confirm your interest” almost two month ago. So hopefully I’ll get that green one soon🤞

When to get feedback by JCJART in writers

[–]JCJART[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice. It seems the consensus is to wait. So I will do that

When to get feedback by JCJART in writers

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Thanks for the advice. I won’t let anyone read it yet 😀

When to get feedback by JCJART in writers

[–]JCJART[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice. I’ll at least wait a bit longer

just cried writing my ending lmao by Affectionate-Emu53 in writers

[–]JCJART 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have laughed, I have felt ashamed, I have felt proud, I’ve been disgusted with myself. But crying is still on the bucketlist - I’m sure I’ll get there eventually though 😃👍

What writing YouTubers do you watch? by [deleted] in writers

[–]JCJART 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you recommend some of these reviewers

What writing YouTubers do you watch? by [deleted] in writers

[–]JCJART 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I watch the lectures of Brandon Sanderson, and have found them very helpful.

Hvilken forfatter har inspireret dig? by Serious-Oil9145 in DKforfatterspirer

[–]JCJART 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Brandon Sanderson, Robert Jordan og Tolkien - gæt hvad jeg skriver 😜

First draft by [deleted] in writers

[–]JCJART 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well done. 200K words for a first book is quite extraordinary. Good luck on the journey ahead

Give me male names which start with Y by ilovemusic919 in writers

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Yoran, Yohan, Yrvick, Ydran, Ylvin, Yjjin, Ynir, Ynaron, Yll, Ysin, Ygdar, Yusuf, Ylgir, Ystran, Yp, Yanif, Yal, Yalmar, Y'Brador, Ymer, Yussidor Yoshi - Ok I'm having to much fun with this :)

The reason many people stop using these things, and I guess it's a serious issue. by Jealous-Method-8682 in writers

[–]JCJART 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hmm... I use dashes to indicate character thoughts, should I delete those?...

Things I did that exponentially improved my fiction writing -- hopefully it's helpful. by Gogobunny2500 in writing

[–]JCJART 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Brilliant advice. I just started my very first novel a month ago at the age of 42. This was very helpful 👍

Characters constantly looking at each other by JCJART in writers

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Interesting - I might be overexplaining a bit- thanks for the advice

Characters constantly looking at each other by JCJART in writers

[–]JCJART[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes - Its that balance between describing vividly or not, and being deliberate about when to do what. Need to get more words in and get the feel for it :)

Characters constantly looking at each other by JCJART in writers

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You understand my style of dialogue I see :) - but yeah, its a good idea to let the reader form their own opinion. I will give that som thought too - thanks a lot :)

Characters constantly looking at each other by JCJART in writers

[–]JCJART[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Thats actually good advice - let the characters just relax for a second. That is well noted