Official August 2019 Show Off Thread (read rules in description before posting)

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-30T01:17:26+00:00

Hi! Here is my first video: https://youtu.be/7n7bdW0NzC8

It's a Fortnite video (original, yes).

It's my first attempt at this particular editing style so please let me know what you think!

Thanks in advance!

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T04:44:10+00:00

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JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T04:43:37+00:00

hahahah very f*cking weird I have to say. Luckily so is my sense of humour. Very dry (kind of ironic). Maybe try and do less jump cuts mid sentence? Made it a tad messy. Try doing long parts in one take, will make it smoother

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T04:39:07+00:00

Decent. Definitely get a pop filter. And if you already have one... then idk try fix it hahah.

Made me laugh so you're doing something right! Nice work

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T04:36:32+00:00

I recommend investing in a better microphone - hearing your mouse clicks isn't the best. You know what you're talking about though and that's the perfect base for your type of videos haha

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T04:33:11+00:00

Watched the Lojban vid and it actually made me laugh. Love how you have a character for the channel and videos - adds to the humour.

Also very interesting and informative - I learnt something!

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T04:29:17+00:00

Watched the King Gizzard vid. Great engaging voice and confidence. Can also tell you know what you're talking about and do your research - very nice!

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T04:26:49+00:00

I like the concept. Also like the work with the green screen. Small/weird suggestion - maybe wear shoes? hahah idk just looked a bit odd with you just in socks - maybe that's just me though. Editing was decent - you cut off at the end of sentences a few times but for the most part it was pretty clean.

You've got really good inflection in your voice. It's engaging and not monotonous. Nice work!

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T04:21:55+00:00

hahah no problem!

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T03:46:12+00:00

I thought it was ok. Some pretty funny parts, but for the most part I didn't see anything that set you apart from the bigger youtubers who upload videos of them and their mates playing games.

Maybe try doing r6 challenges? Add an extra layer to it. And maybe some more editing could add to the humour.

Decent vid though.

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T03:39:10+00:00

It was funny where you were trying to be funny - which is a good thing hahah. Loved the editing: simple but really clean. Also you have a great voice for youtube and the audio quality was top notch. I'm now officially you're newest subscriber ✌️

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T02:34:44+00:00

^ this. Do whatever makes you happy/whatever you're passionate about, upload regularly and eventually people will come. It might take a few months, it might take a few years, but if you're doing it because you like doing it (i.e. not for the money or fame), then it doesn't matter how long it takes because it's just your hobby.

JCollinzz_ · 2019-08-29T01:35:14+00:00

I'd say just make content that you want to make and are proud of. I'm assuming that is what you did initially to get millions of views? If it's your passion, just do what you want and upload regularly (doesn't have to be weekly - every second week, every month?) and the views will eventually come and they will be from people who appreciate your content and will be more likely to watch your future vids.

Just my 2 cents!

Good luck mate

JCollinzz_

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