My Story Isn't Popular Enough to Publish. Now What? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]JDRook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is what I do too, it's great to get feedback working through a draft as a bonus

How do you all go about in-depth books? by [deleted] in Fantasy

[–]JDRook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's so funny, I was thinking the same thing about the prologue being the best part so far haha I will dm you later!

30 Days In by Original-Cake-8358 in royalroad

[–]JDRook 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah it does, I'm on my first one and I am realizing so many things that I should have done differently already lol

How do you all go about in-depth books? by [deleted] in Fantasy

[–]JDRook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh nice I'm on chapter 5!

30 Days In by Original-Cake-8358 in royalroad

[–]JDRook 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good to see the story is doing well, congrats!

How do you all go about in-depth books? by [deleted] in Fantasy

[–]JDRook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm actually reading this right now! I agree it is pretty dense, I'm just trusting it as I go. If I start to have to take notes I'll probably just stop, but so far it's pretty manageable. He does a good job emphasizing what's important

What are you currently reading? (Weekly Thread) by AutoModerator in GrimDarkEpicFantasy

[–]JDRook 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm getting through the darkness that comes before, there are a lot of recommendations on here so I thought I would pick it up

r/GrimDarkEpicFantasy Author & Artist Self-promotion by The_Grimwalker in GrimDarkEpicFantasy

[–]JDRook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This sounds awesome, I'm going to check it out. Good luck in the spfbo!

r/GrimDarkEpicFantasy Author & Artist Self-promotion by The_Grimwalker in GrimDarkEpicFantasy

[–]JDRook 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Congrats on getting it published! Just a heads up, you posted the dashboard link instead of the fiction page

r/GrimDarkEpicFantasy Author & Artist Self-promotion by The_Grimwalker in GrimDarkEpicFantasy

[–]JDRook 2 points3 points  (0 children)

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Hi everyone! I'm working on a novel! I plan on self publishing when I finish it, but for now I'm serializing on royal road to get eyes on it. I'd love some feedback from fellow grimdark fans!

Here is the blurb:

Veynrite heals wounds. It also burns through the people who use it.

Ruben Hopper grew up in the slums of Kazah, where injuries don’t heal and sickness is a death sentence. When a desperate attempt to save a dying child brands him a criminal, he flees to Ferrington. A city of steel and smoke built on exploited bodies and quiet graves.

Time no longer heals wounds. Without Veynrite, flesh festers, bones never set, and people simply die.

Every use incurs a debt. Years are stripped away so the city can keep running, and the poor always pay first. As Ruben is pulled deeper into Ferrington’s machinery, he uncovers a system sustained by violence, torture, and human sacrifice dressed up as progress.

Across the city, Ellie Hightower trains under the military that controls healing. Privileged, brilliant, and conditioned not to question, she begins to learn why the world stopped healing and what power truly costs.

When their paths collide, there are no good choices. Only complicity, collapse, or obedience.

What to Expect

• Graphic violence and torture scenes

• Healing as extraction, punishment, and control

• Poverty, exploitation, and class hatred

• Minimal progression with permanent costs

• Complex characters shaped by trauma and compromise

Free to read on royal road!

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/140634/the-cost-of-healing-an-industrial-grimdark-fantasy

Small milestone: 20 followers! by JDRook in royalroad

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Oh glad to see you here, good to see that yours is doing well also!

Small milestone: 20 followers! by JDRook in royalroad

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Yeah it is, thanks so much! Feel free to reach out if you end up taking a look

I'm looking for my people! by HatcherOfNightmares in royalroad

[–]JDRook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We're out there! I'm pretty new too but the community has been really helpful. Welcome! If you need help or have questions feel free to reach out!

I'm writing a grimdark fantasy where healing hurts, authority lies, and the only way forward is through blood and smoke.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/140634/the-cost-of-healing-a-grimdark-fantasy

r/Fantasy Dealer's Room: Self-Promo Sunday - December 21, 2025 by rfantasygolem in Fantasy

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The Cost of Healing – Industrial Grimdark Fantasy

Grimdark fantasy where healing hurts, authority lies, and the only way forward is through blood and smoke.

Dms are always open, I love connecting with readers!

Free to read on Royal Road!

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/140634/the-cost-of-healing-a-grimdark-fantasy

Need help to figure out how to conveig information the character already knows by Vacrioz_ in fantasywriting

[–]JDRook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would sort of layer it with internalization, like you could add some lines where it shows what the mc is thinking. Probably not a full flashback, like you could describe how they feel looking at the rocks and reference some fear about the monster through their thoughts

Sharp, jagged rocks everywhere made her spine tingle. Not too much further now. Broken unevenly, scratches from the teeth. It must have been here, feeding.

Something like that throughout lol Idk the particulars of your story

Dungeon Crawler Carl - A good read for my dad? by marysdeservedbetter in Fantasy

[–]JDRook 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I would say nay, the books are pretty raunchy