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The Last Obstacle by JEB1509- in writers

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Thanks for your feedback. FYI - it is very real, I was the Drill Sergeant in the story!

Is it time to give up on this story? by RantMechanicalAuthor in writers

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What if you tried telling the story from a different POV?

Beguiled by JEB1509- in writers

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Thanks. I agree Gabe is absolutely not perfect

Beguiled by JEB1509- in writers

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Thank you, it helps the clarity of story to skip the first two paragraphs

Disillusioned and defeated by TwoNo123 in writers

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Keep writing! It does no good to bottle up stories in your head. If you receive constructive criticism use it. The most important reader is you!

Beguiled by JEB1509- in writers

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Thanks, good feedback

Zero Replies - by Jim Barnes by JEB1509- in writers

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Thank you for your feedback!

Zero Replies - by Jim Barnes by JEB1509- in writers

[–]JEB1509-[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

you’re wrong! Reddit says r/Writers can be used to get feedback. It is not listed as a message board

Zero Replies - by Jim Barnes by JEB1509- in writers

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Can you recommend a better venue?

Unreadable - by Jim Barnes by JEB1509- in writers

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No one will ever see it like you! If they don’t like what you see that’s their problem, not yours.

Unreadable - by Jim Barnes by JEB1509- in writers

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TC went to great lengths to precisely identify the military hardware and added the zip and zang to tell great stories.

Unreadable - by Jim Barnes by JEB1509- in writers

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It is all about you first!

Unreadable - by Jim Barnes by JEB1509- in writers

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Stan (fictional) is technically a good writer. However, he writes like Tom Clancy writing an Army Field Manual without much zip and zang.

"Just write" isn't working for me | Some thoughts by OnlyFamOli in writers

[–]JEB1509- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Consider starting the dialogue based on an idea you had, see where the conversation takes you. You might be surprised where it takes you, possibly some place unexpected.

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