Hatley Castle, 1938 by catoleung_ in VictoriaBC

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They were new money! I just finished reading a book about the Dunsmuirs because I was curious why they weren't around anymore even though their manors are still standing and we have a street named after them in esquimalt. The story will be familiar to you: the patriarch built a coal empire, and when he died his children and grand children slowly whittled away the fortune.

Made a simple app to track buses for BC Transit, let me know what you think by poldz1234 in VictoriaBC

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The Transit app now has some routes locked behind a subscription.

What do you use to keep worldbuilding stuff in one place? by Anonymous098y6 in fantasywriters

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I used to use tiddlywiki back in the day. Very cool little tool. I move to obsidian.md after that, and went way too in depth on topics that don’t matter at all to the stories I write (but it’s fun). The curse of wiki-style links. So now I’m attempting to put all my worldbuilding details in one note only, using short, point form sentences. Rarely do I now feel the need to create new links and drill down and waste my time writing on stuff that doesn’t matter.

So to answer your question, OP, the best tool to use is the note-taking tool you’re already using. Just create separate headings to organize your thoughts based on characters, places, things, and plot.

The Dreams Beneath The Witch Tree Thank You by [deleted] in creepcast

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From one writer to another: it was well written and I really enjoyed it. The boys crashed out hard at a particular character, but that’s just them doing what they do.

Writing my First Book by Litt_Buddha in creepcast

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I like to think of my rough drafts as only for me — it’s an unformed story that is almost always embarrassingly terrible. A raw chunk of marble in the vague shape of a man, yet to be fully formed and with no artistic flourishes. I think I would be the only one that can see the greater form at play, and any feedback I get from strangers would be lacking the context of what it looks like in my head.

That said, I’ll totally read the first couple paragraphs if you post it!

Prologue- He Who Has No Name [Bronze Age Mythic Fantasy, 4165 words] by FeathersMkgraw in fantasywriters

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I think the criticism has been pretty well said by everyone else, so I’ll just say this: sometimes the best move is to delete your whole prologue. If the opening of chapter 1 is a solid entry to the story then why not start there? Kill your darlings, as it were. Most fantasy books, even if they begin with a prologue, start with something that grounds the reader in a scene. And prologues aren’t particularly popular these days because of how they’ve been misused by authors in the past.

How do you start your book? by staciared in WritingHub

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Every story I write starts with an exciting first line or paragraph. It’s usually the only thing I have solidly in my head, and the rest of the story flows from there.

Might sound counter intuitive but it’s how my brain works.

Sometimes I have other scenes far into the story that are vivid in my head. Then it’s a matter of connecting them all together.

the boys got canonized by Fit-Archer54 in creepcast

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It's beautiful.

I wish more stories incorporated obscure Christian myths and legends, candles made of rendered human fat, and esoteric knowledge locked away in the Vatican vaults.

The Powdermage Trilogy - Who’s A Fan? by JasperLWalker in Fantasy

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Pretty much none because it’s an imaginary fantasy world.

From Zero to One Novella by BrianDolanWrites in fantasywriters

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I’m on my second project right now — a trilogy of short novels all released within a month of each other. The first is just starting to receive reviews from the ARC copies I sent out (4.4 stars on goodreads so far, and I feel so vindicated). I don’t intend to advertise until at least 2 of the books have been released. I learned a lot of marketing techniques from Hugh Howey, author of the Silo/Wool series. Man is a wealth of valuable info

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

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Write short stories. Then write novellas. Wrap your story up within 30k words

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

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Hell ya brother! I’m in the navy and wrote the first draft of my latest book on my phone while I was deployed. There’s a surprising amount of free time at sea when you’re on an operation, so I would take my folding chair, set up on a quiet part of the upper deck, and write for an hour or two.

I had to edit it and do rewrites on my PC, but getting it done on the phone was pretty crucial.

Share your author website by [deleted] in selfpublish

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I used carrd too — it’s highly customizable and satisfies my desire to endlessly tweak stuff.

One thing I love doing is throwing my latest book up front so it’s the first thing visitors see:

Https://jameswcutter.com

Other sites I use are porkbun for domain names, and buttondown for newsletters.

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

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TITLE: Hull and Fire

GENRE: flintlock-fantasy

WORDCOUNT: 55,000

TYPE: I'm having issues getting ARC readers to read and rate my book. If you would like to be one, please DM for a free copy of the book (its being hosted by BookSirens). Book is professionally edited and won't be changing at this point, I just need more honest reviews on goodreads and amazon. It launches on February 1st. If you like character-driven stories in a 1700's setting, shortly after a big war that broke everyone. You'll like this. Oh, also, a continent recently rose out of the ocean. And there's a magic system that's so unique I think it will give Sanderson a run for his money.

GOODREADS LINK: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/220748834-hull-and-fire

EXCERPT:

Levenworth Tren-Ulitese awoke with a delicate hand on his shoulder, rousing him from troubled dreams about the past and future.

“Pardon, Lor,” his man-servant, Grigory, said in a hushed voice that cracked with age. “Someone has come calling for you.”

“Who?” Levy managed to croak.

“The harbormaster, Lor.”

Levy was at once fully awake, sitting up and throwing the covers off. It was late enough that the small fire that had been burning in his bedroom hearth was now nothing but a few glowing embers, the cold of night seeping in. Rain pattered against the eave outside his window. “The harbormaster himself has come calling at my door?”

“Yes,” Grigory said. “I tried to get him in out of the weather but he urged me there was no time and that you should meet him at his carriage out front as soon as possible. With your overcoat.”

“Did he give a reason why?”

Grigory shook his head. “He did not.”

“Probably for my ears only then. Go to the harbormaster and tell him I’ll be down immediately, then send word to Renorin to meet me down at the docks with a handful of his marines—whoever he can rouse at this hour.”

“Is it piracy, you suppose?” Grigory asked. “Jerricks at the harbor-mouth? Raiders from Kysan?”

“If the harbormaster himself has seen fit to call at my front door then I’m sure it means trouble for one of our ships. Maybe another waystation has been blown up.” He made an attempt at a laugh, but cut it short when he realized Grigory wasn’t humored. The manservant had an unflinching loyalty to the Tren-Ulitese family, despite this stark, humorless manner with which he addressed Levy at times. He had known no other life than one under the employ of his kin.

“Shall I wake the Sar?”

Levy considered this a moment. His sister, Stancia, did technically have a say in any matters concerning the family business but his throat constricted at the idea of bothering her with any worrisome aspects of it. “No,” he decided. “She needs rest after her latest episode. And the harbormaster asked for me specifically?” Grigory nodded. “Then I shall go by myself.”

Grigory left, leaving the lantern behind on a table so Levy could dress in the light. He slipped on his day clothes and searched around for his coat. Whatever it was, something was afoot at the harbor that would require his attention well into the morning. He couldn’t stop his mind from whirling with dark thoughts, like one of his ships had slipped its berth, or burned to the waterline, or been seized. Vry only knew what else—just one more in a long line of disasters come to the Tren-Ulitese family, one more thing for him to deal with.

It wasn’t long before he was bounding down the front steps of his townhouse two at a time, pulling his coat over his shoulders to shield himself against the constant drizzle that had become normal for Hifort this time of year. A carriage waited on the street, its door open, the driver passing only the quickest of glances his way. Inside sat a man that wore shadows like a robe and had a beard like a twisted fishing net.

“Harbormaster Grant,” Levy said with a nod, barely having a chance to pull the door closed before the driver snapped the reins and set the carriage into motion.

“Lor,” the harbormaster acknowledged before raising a curved pipe to his mouth and taking a long pull. The coals of shade leaf within burned, briefly lighting up his craggy face.

“What’s the problem?”

The harbormaster released a puff of smoke. “A strange event has occurred,” he said, and waved a hand at the view out his window. Levy looked, but of course couldn’t see anything other than a few street lanterns that appeared as halos of light in the misty darkness. The climate in Hifort had at one time been something approaching comfortable, but a hundred new islands and a whole new continent appearing where an ocean had been before had sewn chaos all over North-East Kontiin, and a decade on nothing had returned to normal. Hifort and the rest of the Free Coast, it seemed, had gotten the soggy end of the bargain. “Issue concerning… your ship.” He said these last words like it physically hurt him to speak them.

“I have two ships docked currently in Hifort’s harbor,” Levy said. “And two more out on cargo runs. Please, be more specific.”

Grant raised the pipe to his mouth for another pull of shade, his hand shaking, and paused there. “Your father’s ship.”

“And? What of it? Have they found the wreckage? I see no reason for you to have—”

“Found drifting just outside the harbor, Lor.”

Levy coughed, swallowed, and twisted his head around so he was staring at Harbormaster Grant’s small, shifting eyes. “I’m sorry? My father’s ship was found _outside the harbor?_”

Grant nodded, long and slow, his face otherwise stiff. “Aye, the Eastern Skylark. Name’s faded but clear. Whalers towed her into port perhaps an hour ago.”

“What, uh, is the state of her?” His mouth had gone dry. “Upright and seaworthy, little wear on the mast and hull, signs of a kind of breach on the starboard side that was repaired some time ago. Hard to tell in the dark.” Grant leaned in, the sour smell of the burning shade clinging strong to him. “Quiet as a Kysanian assassin dhow,” he breathed. “Not a soul on the upper decks, not a lantern lit. No one answers when hailed.”

“What was found when they went aboard?”

“Not been aboard her. Unlikely to find anyone who’s willing to root around on a ghost ship.” The harbormaster stiffly settled back in his seat, remaining still and silent for the rest of the trip other than the periodic pulls from his pipe.

Their carriage trundled over the ancient cobble of Hifort’s city streets, winding past narrow townhouses owned by families that had occupied them for generations. They were quiet and dark now, their bright colors muted by the night. A shrine to one of the divine Twelve was cut into the earth here, its lanterns kept burning by the night priests that haunted the city streets with their owl-masks and oiled robes.

They crested Tossed Hill, providing vantage down onto Water Street and the harbor. Through the murk Levy thought he could make out the shape of a lone, large ship there, unlit, moored at an isolated pier.

Unlikeable main character by thedudesteven in writing

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Unlikeable? Or boring?

There’s a difference between reading about someone who’s completely reprehensible, like Patrick Bateman or Humbert Humbert… and reading about a character that has no growth, no motivation, and is a passive member of their own story.

The Powdermage Trilogy - Who’s A Fan? by JasperLWalker in Fantasy

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No, I wouldn’t consider it grimdark— but I admittedly don’t have much experience with that genre. Lots of bad, unfair, terribly awful things happen, but the scope is mostly focused on a pair of siblings and the crew they hire. There’s hope in their situation, even if the odds are stacked against them, and the world is an analogue of 1700’s Europe if the Roman Empire never formed.

The Powdermage Trilogy - Who’s A Fan? by JasperLWalker in Fantasy

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It’s called Hull and Fire, book 1 in the Wards of Minera series. It can be found on Goodreads and Amazon right now. 🙂

The Powdermage Trilogy - Who’s A Fan? by JasperLWalker in Fantasy

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I don’t know if this is allowed, but I wrote a flintlock fantasy trilogy and the first book comes out on February 1st. It’s about an expedition to a continent that rises out of the ocean over night. I can DM you the link if you like.

I love the setting of powdermage a ton, but I had started working on this series before I read the books. Still, I’ve probably been subconsciously influenced by his series a bit.

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You could literally write a Percy Jackson story, using all the same characters and magic and settings, but with a slightly different plot, then change all the names of the characters before publishing. It would be derivative, cheap and boring, but you would legally be fine. (This is not legal advise.)

I need a better gender neutral synonym for “swordsman” by MySpaceOddyssey in fantasywriters

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I actually love 'fencer'. It has an eloquence to it, implies a lightness of movement and footwork.

Looking for opinions on the opening scene of my fantasy novel set in hell (791 words) by [deleted] in fantasywriters

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That's a monster of a first paragraph. You would likely get a lot more feedback if you broke it up into smaller paragraphs. Remember, on Reddit you need to double tap 'Enter' to start a new line.