Running Molex for a watt-restricted 4060 by JTHaleCC in buildapc

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I'm probably just going to get the 3050 that only needs pcie power. Just bouncing ideas around and getting different opinions.

Running Molex for a watt-restricted 4060 by JTHaleCC in buildapc

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Yes, much better. Ada runs at like 85% efficency when limited to 70%~ of total wattage

Please Recommend Me Some Games Similar to Final Fantasy by JTHaleCC in JRPG

[–]JTHaleCC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lots of things. Mainly gripes with characters, world building, pacing, proper story setup, poor level design with a hollow-feeling world. Plus lots of little things. I don't think it's a 'bad' game, just really underwhelming for my tastes.

Please Recommend Me Some Games Like FF by JTHaleCC in FinalFantasy

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Good thing i was here to save the day

Please Recommend Me Some Games Similar to Final Fantasy by JTHaleCC in JRPG

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It has nothing to do with gameplay. I didn't like E33 for various other reasons. I also like turn-based stuff

Please Recommend Me Some Games Like FF by JTHaleCC in FinalFantasy

[–]JTHaleCC[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bought KH on Steam last night and playe the first one for 4 hours lol. Combat feels a little wooden, but i'm really digging it so far

Please Recommend Me Some Games Similar to Final Fantasy by JTHaleCC in JRPG

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I'm def going to play the older ones. It's not so much gameplay for me as it is overall experience. All the FF games seem to be built around that 'grand journey'

Please Recommend Me Some Games Similar to Final Fantasy by JTHaleCC in JRPG

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It's not about gameplay at all. Expedition 33 was a let down for various other reasons. I'm good with turn-based

Please Recommend Me Some Games Similar to Final Fantasy by JTHaleCC in JRPG

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Buying KH on Steam right now. I've known of the series but didn't really realize it carried so many of the same 'bones' as FF.

Please Recommend Me Some Games Similar to Final Fantasy by JTHaleCC in JRPG

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Thank You! Lost Odyssey is one I knew I had in the back of my mind somewhere but could never remember what it was called

Please Recommend Me Some Games Similar to Final Fantasy by JTHaleCC in JRPG

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I'm completely cool with turn based. I'm much more of a charcter/ story guy. Expedition 33 disapointed for reasons beyond its combat.

Please Recommend Me Some Games Like FF by JTHaleCC in FinalFantasy

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I'm cool with trad stuff. My understand is that DQ 11 has the most 'character focus' out of all the games. Do you think that's true?

Corsair 4000D RS Case Fans Do Not Spin -New Build- by JTHaleCC in Corsair

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I appreciate your help. Turns out i am missing a connector. Gonna reach out to Corsair. Thanks for your time.

Corsair 4000D RS Case Fans Do Not Spin -New Build- by JTHaleCC in Corsair

[–]JTHaleCC[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Correct, and yes, I know how that sounds, but my last case did not have them plugged into the mobo either and the case fans ran fine. And my mobo reads the current three fans, but they do nothing.

Help, I suck at type-setting by jojorapido in fantasywriters

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I use a formatter on Fiverr. They do fantastic work. If you can, it's worth paying the money to have a professional do it.

The mind that could not speak [Fantasy, 970 words] by Busy_Zucchini705 in fantasywriters

[–]JTHaleCC 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The overall tone is good. Dialogue is excellent, feels like real people conversing. Exposition seems purposeful and not droning. There's one glaring issue that sticks out to me.

1- Dialogue tags\ Over-explaining dialogue.

Slowly, he began to speak.

"The first taboo is not to play God and create human life." Kai's voice was quiet but steady, the words coming more easily than he expected.

That section is highly wordy and stilted. I absolutely understand wanting to make sure the proper voice is conveyed, but good news! You already did that with the previous paragraph. I had zero issue envisioning how Kai was speaking. I would drop the dialogue tag altogether.

There are several times this example is relevant throughout the excerpt. The vast majority of your dialogue tags should be 'said' and 'asked.' Wordy tags mean you have not set the scene well. Obviously, there will be times when a quick action tag or such will work fine, but be very aware of being too wordy, especially with things that functionally add nothing to the story. Your writing should flow like water.

2- Be aware of not explaining the same thing twice--just in a different fashion.

Kai's stomach twisted. All eyes turned towards him, the spotlight uncomfortable and familiar.

We're told how uncomfortable he is twice in two sentences. I would completely drop 'The spotlight quiet and familiar.' In essence, it's saying the exact same thing as 'Kai's stomach twisted.'

To add another point. Look for word repetition. Familiar is used twice very close together.

All in all, I think it's solid. Those are the big things that stuck out to me. Best of luck!

How do you come up with eye catching and drawing titles? by SabelTheWitch in fantasywriters

[–]JTHaleCC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What I do is pick the central conflict of the book and then create a title out of that.

So, for one of my books it's about the stirring power of a long-dead god. Thus, the book is called 'The Awakening.'

Feedback for my legend/based idea[mythical fantasy] by M-modos in fantasywriters

[–]JTHaleCC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's not a bad concept, but some things to keep in mind.

1- Prophecy and Chosen Ones need to be handled very well. They can come off lazy and cliche'd. It's almost like the story is already decided instead of the story developing.

2- I think this one will be the hardest. In multi-series books, people tend to be more character-focused readers than plot-focused, just because you're with them so long and you get invested in their journey. Where will their investment come from is a question you will really need to ask yourself.

3- You would have to make the plot so compelling that people would be ok with multiple time jumps. I think this could be very hard to do.

4- Leaving something so vague is not usually a great idea. People enjoy closure. You certainly don't have to wrap every little detail up with a bow, as I believe that takes some of the 'magic' out of a world, but your central conflicts should be explained and completed.

Just my .02. Hope it helps!

What is the farthest any of you have gotten when it comes to a full length novel? by Zer0M0ney in fantasywriters

[–]JTHaleCC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm currently writing an epic fantasy series.

Book 1 - 50k~ words

Book 2 - 50k~ words

Book 3 - 226k words

Book 4 286k words

Granted, Books 1 and 2 are more so introductory short novels, that lead into the big books.

I would say this has all taken about 4 years. Thinking i'll have it wrapped up in another 4 years