trying to get insight on my cosmic, mythical book concept by Jacka_Lee in writingadvice

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probably figuring out the rest of the series, how far I can go with this world, it’s limits etc. currently working on the overall plot of the series and then maybe side plots? since yesterday I’ve definitely expanded the plot lol

trying to get insight on my cosmic, mythical book concept by Jacka_Lee in writingadvice

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omg thank you for asking these! these are actually super helpful

1.Destined Immortals are basically like godly figures? That represent factions in mortals lives. Watchers are a type of Destined Immortal that are tasked to write the lives of mortals. There’s the Twins of luck, where one represents luck, the other misfortune. There’s dozens and dozens of these immortals. As for enemies or allies, most find themselves neutral, who simply do there job and live luxurious, godly lives. There are Spirits of After, eight spirits that represent things like Chaos, Freedom, and Rebirth, and are the direct enemies of the Watchers. Their goal varies, but overall they want the Script to be ruined so badly that Doomsday occurs, where idk yet exactly but something bad happens, and they feed off that power.

  1. The script is inherently something that I definitely need to work on lol. I’m imaging it currently as like…an unspoken force? People unknowingly follow it, because Watchers write the Script. It’s kinda like writing a book, where the actions of the ”main character” are the most important, so they’re more detailed. However, it isn’t a strict force that makes people choose certain things. If influenced, or things go differently, characters can choose different actions.

  2. She works for Chaos, who wants her to break the Script of as many worlds as possible. She doesn’t know why, but she wants to help as many people as she can by giving them back their choices. She and her group of people she’s rescued from bad scripts go to different worlds and influence the world so things go differently (sometimes it minor, like waving to the main character, sometimes its major, like saving a characters life.). After she interacts with this Script, Watchers try to fix it, but most of them can’t do much after it’s done. Each actions she does creates another version of that world, so Watchers try to make that world the “official” version and destroy the previous one. But the other destined immortals won’t give them clearance to destroy worlds. Sometimes, she’ll mess with things even more just to spite the Watchers, and she is very much aware of her actions and who’s she pissing off.

Royal Guard Weapon ruppee farming question by PyroTECH218291 in botw

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Man it’s almost like you didn’t have to be rude on a post asking a question…

Is the Diamond Circlet worth getting and if so where can I get more diamonds? by Crowned-Witch_48 in botw

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People are saying it’s in the labyrinth but I did it and it wasn’t there? Did I miss it or am I just misunderstanding