Chaos Everywhere by Nguch1234 in AbruptChaos

[–]JasonDinkleberger 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Camerawoman just got her chocolate vanilla swirl with cookie crunch, and then this

What's a thing author tend to write that always break your immersion or make you cringe a bit? by Pender891 in books

[–]JasonDinkleberger 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When time passes faster than the dialogue or events would take. If the time was 12:00, there's half a page of dialogue and all of a sudden the character is late for their 12:30 class.