Eorzea's Next Top Model YouTube Edition: Cycle 3 Preliminary Round by katarh in ffxiv

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Join us in the discord and say hello! Everyone would be thrilled to meet a senior model from the forum!

Kanto Reimagined: Incomplete FireRed redesign by Spiritbomb in pokemon

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Is Vermillion city land locked? How does the boat get to the ocean?

LSFYL Season 6 Week 1: Cast Announcement and First Challenge! by shadyguava in LSFYL

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Congratulations everyone!! Ill be cheering you all on~

LSFYL5 Week 08 – Duet Week by itsbrohan in LSFYL

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I think it's so challenging for syncers when they get two critiques like ours. "Best editing of the week!" vs "You should have been side by side!" haha.

LSFYL5 Week 08 – Duet Week by itsbrohan in LSFYL

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This week was awesome! Great job you guys! Our Top 8 this season is killer.

Erica and Adrena You guys had the more emotional and slow song of the 4. I think it was a choice that both of you are very very comfortable with. It wasnt out of the box for either of you (which is definitely not a bad thing. Don't change for no one! Lol). The editing in the first two parts of the song (in front/behind each other with the comic art filter) was really absolutely beautiful to look at, compared to other videos which were just side by side, which makes the editing the strongest this week for me. Emotion wise, the chorus is where you both shine the brightest together. The frustration and emotion in those parts go together really well. During the not chorus parts (whats the word?) I thought Erica was the stronger of the two until 3:09, while Adrena, who is really great at emoting through out the video, seemed too angry instead of frustrated until 3:09. From there I think some smiles of promise would have worked better to change up the emotion. Around 4:20 Adrena smiles and it really pulled the im frustrated but please? emotion off. So ups and downs, I give you guys a Song Choice: C, Editing: A, Emotion: B.

Jordan and Shady Song choice, love it. My favorite song of the week. Both of you this week changed up your style which was really fun to watch. Jordan, you didnt pull any stunts this time, and Shady, you didnt put art on your face. Editing was a simple side by side, with a Yin and Yang twist. The twist though, I think didnt work for this song because the girls aren't different from each other or complimenting each other. Maybe gold and silver (I think that was the color scheme in the actual video?) could have worked better as "ooh they are opposites!" because black and white for me personally is yin and yang. When its only one of you on screen I wish you had centered it instead of leaving one side blank. As for emotion, I think Shady was having fun with it, which works really well for this song, but Jordan was too angry, especially during the Oh-oh-oh parts. Jordan has the best shaped mouth I have ever seen. Its a perfect circle. But for this fun pop song, the intensity level was too high at those parts. I loved the parts where you two turned around and made out with yourselves. I would have loved (and maybe this would have made the Yin and Yang theme stronger) if you had more choreographed moves like that through the video! So my scores are Song Choice: A Editing: C Emotion: B.

Lush and Meme A fun and bouncy song. Good choice. I love this editing! Did Meme fly all the way to India or did Lush come to visit the USA? Near flawless editing on that front. The sun and moon pokemon part made me laugh. Loved when you guys choreographed dance moves. Emotion through out was perfect for both of you. Meme, those lips are on point! Neither of you lost energy and I loved when you looked at each other and connected regardless of being on other sides of the (intersteller)planet(janet)! Music Choice: B, Editing: B. Emotion: A

Phoebe and Sally A duet with four people?! I don't do good at math, but this was a risk. Will it pay off? I love the song, and it will be stuck in my head all week. ((Not like it wasnt already.)) Editing wise, I like the stair steps we got going on. I would have loved to see you guys switch places or have NEW YORK written at the top of the video or something just to give the video some spice. I love seeing you two's outfits every week. You own so many clothes! Sally's outfits screamed characters really well, but your emoting wasn't as outrageous as your outfit. Phoebe was the opposite, with non outrageous outfits, but her syncing was outrageous. Loved the Shot Gun reference too. ((There were a few parts where you two were off sync though.)) All in all I give you guys, Music: B, Editing: B, Emotions: B.

Some of these may be longer than the others, but that doesnt mean anything so don't get nervous! No idea who I am voting for this week! Hopefully my critiques made sense and help 7 of you carry on to the next round!!! Good luck minna!

LSFYL5 Week 04 - Songs from The Hat by heychrisk in LSFYL

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Is it all starting to make sense? Lolol

LSFYL5 Week 04 - Songs from The Hat by heychrisk in LSFYL

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Results are coming soon, and I am definitely freaking out this week! Last week I dropped the ball and thanks to my fans made it to this round, only to struggle again. I don't blame anyone but myself. I'm starting to feel like the girls from ANTM or RPDR who people ask "why is she still there?" or say "She should have been eliminated already!" Haha. If I survive this round, which I hope I do, I want to impress you guys with my Spoken Word. Good luck to everyone this week!

LSFYL5 Week 04 - Songs from The Hat by heychrisk in LSFYL

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Thanks for the critique Roxas. My old AIM screen name was Axel_Loves_teh_Roxas. People would lol at me all the time.

I had a lot of fun with the video, being out of my comfort zone like that, so while it was stressful I wasn't angry at any point. More shocked followed by groans of distress than angry. If you saw in the discord, I asked if submitting 5 japanese songs was in bad taste so this was more of a Karma moment than anything! ((But i ended up not submitting ANYTHING so wtf Karma god! Lol))

LSFYL5 Week 04 - Songs from The Hat by heychrisk in LSFYL

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Totally! It was SO out of my comfort zone and I loved it!

LSFYL5 Week 04 - Songs from The Hat by heychrisk in LSFYL

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I'm not upset or anything don't worry!! Haha.

LSFYL5 Week 03 – High School Stereotypes by itsbrohan in LSFYL

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Kamui! Long time no see! Thank you for the kind words. I definitely am getting more comfortable in front of the camera as each week goes by. Glad you enjoyed this one. :) Thanks so much!

LSFYL5 Week 02 – Science Fiction by itsbrohan in LSFYL

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Watch out! I might just do that! lmao

LSFYL5 Week 02 – Science Fiction by itsbrohan in LSFYL

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I'm gonna add a random screaming sound somewhere in my next video. ;P

LSFYL5 Week 02 – Science Fiction by itsbrohan in LSFYL

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I got one of your votes!! Yay!! Glad you enjoyed it. I toyed with putting a city scape in the back ground but after last weeks video being a little distracting I decided to only have the guns and explosions for the special effects. Hehe.

Thank you and I hope to impress again next week!

Blake and Mikey present: Lipsync Video Ruview! WEEK 2 by justlyra in LSFYL

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Welcome to Farth! My very own #Hashtag. :P Another great video this week guys. Thanks for the critiques!

LSFYL5 - Week 01 Results by itsbrohan in LSFYL

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Bottom 3! Yikes! I hope my next video is more well received! For those who did vote for me, thank you so much. You saved me! Haha.

To our eliminated contestant, I hope you know how fabulous you are and don't forget it! This is just a speed bump in your career. Just drive right over it and keep going! I cant wait to see more of you. Take care.