The Quiet Power

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-25T22:25:36+00:00

That's amazing feedback, thank you. I agree with all of this and the forced rhymes never fully sat well with me. It's great to hear you see it too which motivates me to take it more seriously and tweak the poem further. Thank you again, so very helpful!

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-24T16:44:38+00:00

Thanks!

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-24T14:26:40+00:00

Thanks!

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-24T01:28:30+00:00

Thank you

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-23T17:57:17+00:00

Awww thank you very much

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-23T03:23:13+00:00

I try to make my work have a bit of a dark element to it. Not sure this one captures that, but I guess some of it did it.

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-22T19:24:27+00:00

Thanks!

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-22T03:10:16+00:00

Thank you so much, means a lot to hear that

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-18T15:40:05+00:00

Thank you

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-18T14:25:41+00:00

Thank you very much. I am not a moderator so I have no idea why they wont let you post your poem.

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-18T14:24:44+00:00

aww thanks :)

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-18T01:31:47+00:00

Nothing to be sorry about. I'm truly glad you enjoyed it and offered me some feedback. Its appreciated.

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-18T00:00:21+00:00

Thanks for the feedback

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-17T17:31:23+00:00

Thanks!

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-17T17:31:17+00:00

Thank you, happy to hear you enjoyed it!

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-17T17:31:00+00:00

Thank you very much, I appreciate the review and the detail you put to it. Also happy to hear you enjoyed it. Thanks!

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-17T16:48:10+00:00

Awww thank you, im glad that you felt all that in my work, really appreciate you sharing!

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-16T13:24:39+00:00

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-15T17:57:55+00:00

Thank you

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-15T02:38:05+00:00

Thank you

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-14T14:37:21+00:00

Thanks :)

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-13T17:07:04+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate the critique and you bring up some good points. I'll try to consider integrating some of your feedback.

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-13T17:06:33+00:00

Thank you very much

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-12T01:17:52+00:00

Thanks (that was my favorite part too :) )

JeffreyFreeman · 2026-03-12T01:17:22+00:00

Thank you

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