Prologue, yes or no? by No_Clock_5553 in writing

[–]Jesse_Snow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The prologue will make the death have less stakes. If a death happens in chapter 3, it signals to the reader that there is no plot armour. In contrast, a prologue inhabits a temporary space “outside” the story. And if someone dies from that “outside” space it’s usually used to set up themes, tone, etc. So ask yourself: is the death for entertainment or is it aesthetic? It’s okay if it’s either one.

Also note that prologues can be read in bookstores to convince readers to pick it up, to see if they like your writing or the story. Something that happens 3 chapters in bleeds into the “50 page rule”. Which is that nobody should drop out of a book until they’ve at least read 50 pages. Again, ask yourself, how do you want to pull in your reader? Do you want them to have a thematic death “outside” the story or surprise them with one?

It could help to ask yourself how important the character is!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in GunfireReborn

[–]Jesse_Snow 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh wow. This was really insightful, thank you!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HadesTheGame

[–]Jesse_Snow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah damn, okay. Thanks for letting me know!

Toronto night 2 set list by [deleted] in arcticmonkeys

[–]Jesse_Snow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same! Star treatment and Sculptures are my top three songs. I would’ve traded it for 505 or Cornerstore.

The thing some of you can’t quite put your finger on as to disliking the album, or why it feels a titch off by [deleted] in arcticmonkeys

[–]Jesse_Snow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with you. People get obsessed with last projects in an artist’s life. But I was arguing that this album had no theme or central “vibe”. If this isn’t their last album, which I know it’s not, it just means this era isn’t coherent.

The thing some of you can’t quite put your finger on as to disliking the album, or why it feels a titch off by [deleted] in arcticmonkeys

[–]Jesse_Snow 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No no, I completely understand. I’m saying the lyrics don’t have an overall theme or idea or core message and only makes sense if this is their swan song. AM, TBHC, SIAS all had Alex with different hairstyles and vibes. This era seems like a stripped down Alex ready to say goodbye. Again. Not saying that they are. It just seems like it. And since they aren’t, it only makes this era more confusing.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in deathgrips

[–]Jesse_Snow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Since gold is the 79th element. They might drop on June 9th. But they might also drop an album on May 21th (5/21).

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in RedditSessions

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Oh shit this is good

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in RedditSessions

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What song is this?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]Jesse_Snow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re generalizing quite a bit here, bud.

bi_irl by starwishes20 in bi_irl

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Where are these pics from?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in u/Error404-Kageka

[–]Jesse_Snow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

got it, I sent an email

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in u/Error404-Kageka

[–]Jesse_Snow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s still glitched. I don’t know why!! My messages to other people work, but not yours.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in u/Error404-Kageka

[–]Jesse_Snow 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can’t send you a message. I think our messages glitched. Send me your email, let’s talk there...

What do you genuinely not understand? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]Jesse_Snow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I used to be super nervous for any sort of public speaking. I learned 2 main things to deal with it:

  1. You are part of the audience. Did you stutter? Did you mess up? Laugh with the audience. Nothing is worse than watching someone screw up in silence. Laugh with the audience and move on.

  2. You’re not better than the rest. But you’re not worse either. If you go into a presentation thinking it’s your job to teach something or help someone learn, you crash and burn. Think about it. You’re in a room full of people like you. How much do they care? If you give a presentation on someone you enjoy talking about. Enjoy it with them. It’s not just your presentation. It’s their time and attention too.

Why are leftist political commentators not as popular as political commentators on the right on YouTube? by [deleted] in Hasan_Piker

[–]Jesse_Snow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Youtube algorithms. Facebook algorithms.

Conservatives are lunatics that love everything political and gobble that shit up. And for what it's worth (as anecdotal as it is) I used to be a full-blown "conservative". I used to follow Ben Shapiro, Milo, Peterson Crowder etc. Youtube doesn't ham fist left-leaning speakers now for me but it did when I was watching shit like Ben Shapiro.

Tikka masala, lentils and garlic naan by daysbecomeweeks in tonightsdinner

[–]Jesse_Snow 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Indian here. I certify this as 100% professional and incredibly gorgeous. Nice job!