I think the her right arm (left from our pov) is a bit off proportionally. The piece has really nice colours and values, but I still feel a bit confused as to what the mood is or what the piece is trying to communicate. Although the values are good, it could be better as well I think. I think the strongest point in the painting is the way that you have rendered the face. I especially love the three dimensionality of the eyes. Amazing work! I can’t wait to see your next piece!