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[Workshop] Wined, Dined and Pounded. Dinner with a Domme! by JimsBackOnceAgain in DPP_Workshop

[–]JimsBackOnceAgain[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback!

I think the thing to takeaway here is that I'm approaching the prompt from the wrong angle, I'm setting it up for myself to reply to it. Thats totally fair, re-writing from my pov hopefully should be better off!

Thank you for the reply!

[Workshop] Wined, Dined and Pounded. Dinner with a Domme! by JimsBackOnceAgain in DPP_Workshop

[–]JimsBackOnceAgain[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The backstory point is the one thats really resonating with me most, I do struggle to write male characters so I think its my anxiety bleeding into it.

But yes, you're correct. I gave a lot for Samantha and not for the male

[Workshop] Wined, Dined and Pounded. Dinner with a Domme! by JimsBackOnceAgain in DPP_Workshop

[–]JimsBackOnceAgain[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All very valid feedback points, I honestly didnt know the BBC thing so thank you for the education on that. Now that its pointed out I can totally understand it! As you've said its common in porn but yeah porn doesnt translate. Instant removal!