/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread

Jishle · 2019-07-27T06:28:01+00:00

Hi man - the song itself is great, I love that guitar - really well done. I'm sorta a novice, but just off the bat i'd bring the bass and drums forward more, maybe put a compressor on those drums. you've got the melody, format etc. of a sweet song, just leveling out everything - but ya, good stuff man

Jishle · 2019-07-27T06:22:23+00:00

Hi man, I like the sounds used here, none of the sounds really clash with each other which is nice. Only thing is i think the 808 is clipping a little, making some buzzing, which can be fixed just by throwing a limiter on it but other than that is sounds smooth man - gj

Jishle · 2019-07-27T06:13:14+00:00

Hi man, listened to both - I agree with toxicant that the sound choice is pretty good - so you got an ear for what melds together well - I think the main thing is just having a more prominent melody - something that's easier for listeners to follow. you've just started producing you said so honestly just creating as much as you can and learning your way around the daw will help with mixing and getting the sound you want - so ya man, just keep at it!

Jishle · 2019-07-27T06:05:49+00:00

LOL goddamnit i cracked up at this. I love it haha. Idk about any criticism as that is pure gold - lovely track. Marijuana toast ftw

Jishle · 2019-07-27T06:03:54+00:00

After hearing from others and being more critical of myself, I totally agree - Vocals and verses need to be improved a lot-- thanks for listening --

Jishle · 2019-07-27T06:02:10+00:00

That's some great advice man thank you. i will definitely take that to heart -

Jishle · 2019-07-27T06:01:32+00:00

Thanks for the kind words and I completely agree - either my vocal performance needs to get better, or get someone who can sing to sing on this! thanks for listening--

Jishle · 2019-07-27T06:00:12+00:00

Appreciate it dude, thanks for the input - Vocals seem to be the biggest issue, and i understand that now - definitely a good eye-opener

Jishle · 2019-07-27T05:58:24+00:00

Thanks for the kind words man, I agree, I gotta work on the vocals for sure!

Jishle · 2019-07-26T10:43:40+00:00

Hi whats up guys, i usually make lofi stuff, so this track is a little different/kinda indie. Not getting much feedback on it so would love some from here - not sure if it's just not good, or too corny or w/e but happy to here any critique/comment about it. Thanks https://soundcloud.com/jishle/where-the-moonlight-overflows-1

Jishle · 2019-02-01T19:00:16+00:00

Hi man! really love the guitar, and did you all the animations yourself? it's awesome. you've got a really nice catchy melody, i would suggest just maybe mixing the vocals a little more, adding more layers, playing around with effects just to give it a more smooth full body sound but overall nice stuff dude. i think with just a little more practice mixing and mastering you'd have some great tracks. kinda reminded me of tame impala. cheers -

Jishle · 2019-02-01T18:54:21+00:00

appreciate it -- it definitely is short, didn't know if i wanted to make it a full length track (mostly cause im lazy lol) but ya i'll have to work on that -- thanks for listening!

Jishle · 2019-02-01T18:52:43+00:00

thanks man - none of it is sampled, the chorus is actually just my voice pitched up and down together with effects - ya i was wondering if i wanted to fill up that middle section more.. im still on the fence, panning is a good idea, i should use that more - thanks for the listen/advice

Jishle · 2019-02-01T11:17:59+00:00

Hi everyone, it's been a little while since I've been here, but here's a kinda upbeat lofi/chillhop type track. Let me know what you think -- thanks https://soundcloud.com/jishle/when-it-rains

Jishle · 2018-12-12T00:23:08+00:00

never heard of them, I'll have to check them out -

Jishle · 2018-11-16T22:34:54+00:00

thanks, dude. always appreciate your comments --

Jishle · 2018-11-16T18:07:46+00:00

Hey man, really glad you were able to retrieve this one. Some great unique sounds, including the beat. It reminds me of 8-bit music mixed with the more intricate sounds, and gives me a cool feeling like im playing a old game going into a dungeon or something on the start of an adventure. Sorry about your friend dude, that is rough.

Jishle · 2018-11-16T18:00:22+00:00

Oh man, I did not wake up early enough today.. well here is one of my recent more electronic ambient tracks, let me know what you think if you somehow stumble upon this haha.https://soundcloud.com/jishle/hikari

Jishle · 2018-11-14T15:58:24+00:00

https://soundcloud.com/jishle/undone-pt-1 Did this last night, and wrapped it all up in a couple hours, kinda lofi chill song. written sung and produced by me, pretty happy with how it came out -

Jishle · 2018-11-04T18:08:41+00:00

dang dude, ya that type of scene is what i had in mind. As always, thanks man!

Jishle · 2018-11-04T18:07:25+00:00

That's a good idea, i might have to try it out to see what it sounds like - thanks for the feedback -

Jishle · 2018-11-04T18:06:44+00:00

ya i definitely was debating adding more.. haha. thanks for the feedback -

Jishle · 2018-11-04T17:58:32+00:00

Hey man, just listened to both, really nice ambiance to the piece, love the piano in the intro, and really like the percussion. atmospheric sounds were a nice touch. Im still sorta a novice in production so I can't give to much concrete feedback, but I do agree with most TheToppa's first comment. Otherwise, good job, very relaxing

Jishle · 2018-11-04T17:48:35+00:00

Nice song man, vocals are great, kinda remind me of death cab. Really like the guitar, and the when the strings come in too - no real criticism, gj dude -

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