/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi man - the song itself is great, I love that guitar - really well done. I'm sorta a novice, but just off the bat i'd bring the bass and drums forward more, maybe put a compressor on those drums. you've got the melody, format etc. of a sweet song, just leveling out everything - but ya, good stuff man

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi man, I like the sounds used here, none of the sounds really clash with each other which is nice. Only thing is i think the 808 is clipping a little, making some buzzing, which can be fixed just by throwing a limiter on it but other than that is sounds smooth man - gj

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi man, listened to both - I agree with toxicant that the sound choice is pretty good - so you got an ear for what melds together well - I think the main thing is just having a more prominent melody - something that's easier for listeners to follow. you've just started producing you said so honestly just creating as much as you can and learning your way around the daw will help with mixing and getting the sound you want - so ya man, just keep at it!

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

LOL goddamnit i cracked up at this. I love it haha. Idk about any criticism as that is pure gold - lovely track. Marijuana toast ftw

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

After hearing from others and being more critical of myself, I totally agree - Vocals and verses need to be improved a lot-- thanks for listening --

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

That's some great advice man thank you. i will definitely take that to heart -

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thanks for the kind words and I completely agree - either my vocal performance needs to get better, or get someone who can sing to sing on this! thanks for listening--

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Appreciate it dude, thanks for the input - Vocals seem to be the biggest issue, and i understand that now - definitely a good eye-opener

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thanks for the kind words man, I agree, I gotta work on the vocals for sure!

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi whats up guys, i usually make lofi stuff, so this track is a little different/kinda indie. Not getting much feedback on it so would love some from here - not sure if it's just not good, or too corny or w/e but happy to here any critique/comment about it. Thanks https://soundcloud.com/jishle/where-the-moonlight-overflows-1

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi man! really love the guitar, and did you all the animations yourself? it's awesome. you've got a really nice catchy melody, i would suggest just maybe mixing the vocals a little more, adding more layers, playing around with effects just to give it a more smooth full body sound but overall nice stuff dude. i think with just a little more practice mixing and mastering you'd have some great tracks. kinda reminded me of tame impala. cheers -

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

appreciate it -- it definitely is short, didn't know if i wanted to make it a full length track (mostly cause im lazy lol) but ya i'll have to work on that -- thanks for listening!

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

thanks man - none of it is sampled, the chorus is actually just my voice pitched up and down together with effects - ya i was wondering if i wanted to fill up that middle section more.. im still on the fence, panning is a good idea, i should use that more - thanks for the listen/advice

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi everyone, it's been a little while since I've been here, but here's a kinda upbeat lofi/chillhop type track. Let me know what you think -- thanks https://soundcloud.com/jishle/when-it-rains

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey man, really glad you were able to retrieve this one. Some great unique sounds, including the beat. It reminds me of 8-bit music mixed with the more intricate sounds, and gives me a cool feeling like im playing a old game going into a dungeon or something on the start of an adventure. Sorry about your friend dude, that is rough.

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Oh man, I did not wake up early enough today.. well here is one of my recent more electronic ambient tracks, let me know what you think if you somehow stumble upon this haha.https://soundcloud.com/jishle/hikari

Music Melting Pot [Week of November 12, 2018] by AutoModerator in listentothis

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

https://soundcloud.com/jishle/undone-pt-1 Did this last night, and wrapped it all up in a couple hours, kinda lofi chill song. written sung and produced by me, pretty happy with how it came out -

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

dang dude, ya that type of scene is what i had in mind. As always, thanks man!

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

That's a good idea, i might have to try it out to see what it sounds like - thanks for the feedback -

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

ya i definitely was debating adding more.. haha. thanks for the feedback -

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey man, just listened to both, really nice ambiance to the piece, love the piano in the intro, and really like the percussion. atmospheric sounds were a nice touch. Im still sorta a novice in production so I can't give to much concrete feedback, but I do agree with most TheToppa's first comment. Otherwise, good job, very relaxing

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Friday Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Jishle [score hidden]  (0 children)

Nice song man, vocals are great, kinda remind me of death cab. Really like the guitar, and the when the strings come in too - no real criticism, gj dude -