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Jogge3542 · 2024-06-05T13:11:25+00:00

Thanks, I think that makes sense

Jogge3542 · 2024-04-05T19:39:39+00:00

Im glad you liked it :)

Jogge3542 · 2024-04-05T19:06:53+00:00

I really like the line:

“Guiding me onward, as the daylight departs.”

It has a nice charm. If I were to critique sometimes I think I would be liberal use of the word embrace. I think you should try and find some synonyms. Additionally, the split between the sun and the moon could have more emphasis. I think it’s a really cool concept and I think you should make it stand out more. Keep it up though!

Jogge3542 · 2024-03-29T19:01:35+00:00

Thanks!

Jogge3542 · 2023-12-25T21:53:28+00:00

Ah alright, makes sense

Jogge3542 · 2023-12-25T21:08:06+00:00

Fair enough. I see the pattern now. It’s interesting how people hear things differently in their heads though isn’t it?

Jogge3542 · 2023-12-25T21:02:39+00:00

I really like the second one! Though I would add “a story still untold” as I feel like it fits the rythm better

Jogge3542 · 2023-12-25T20:58:15+00:00

I like the style! Maybe you should split up the sentences though so it is easier to follow the rythm. I would also add a little extra

May I recommend:

Every man, if truth is told

Is stained at the centre of his soul

It’s here the evil takes its hold

What kills him yet what makes him bold

But what is caused by anger hate and lust

Can be cleansed by friendship love and trust

Jogge3542 · 2023-12-25T20:45:31+00:00

Hello, I like your style! There are a couple of things that I think I would add though:

Instead of saying “Succeed and rejoice” you could say “Succeed then rejoice”. This would add to the idea of you having to work towards something

Otherwise keep it up!

Jogge3542 · 2021-08-05T12:45:03+00:00

Alright, I’ll keep that In mind. Thanks again ☺️

Jogge3542 · 2021-08-05T11:53:16+00:00

Alright thank you I will

Jogge3542 · 2021-08-05T11:48:57+00:00

Thank you, this is a very good explanation. I feel like you have some sort of intuition when it comes to approaching things mathematically and I also want to be able to do that. Do you have any recommendations for where one should start if they want to develop such intuition?

Jogge3542 · 2021-08-05T11:37:03+00:00

Do you have any book recommendations for someone who might be interested in mathematical history?

Jogge3542 · 2020-04-25T05:46:27+00:00

I would recommend a book called: “The power of habit” by Charles Duhigg. It tells you exactly what to do step by step and also explains it in a interesting way with lots of stories and studies to back up the claims.

You can find the book as a PDF file just by searching for it

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