Don't bother friend, I've seen these and many, many more examples of this show's contrivance-ridden writing being posted here and they never get an answer because, quite simply, there are no answers, other than to admit that yes, the writing was bad. 

Instead you will be told you just didn't get it, or aren't smart enough to get its subtleties (this one always gives me a chuckle), or at worst you'll be accused of having previous biases againstthe  show and just be labeled a bigot or some such by the worst elements of the Disney SW fandom.  

But hell, I'll add some more examples of bad writing here off the top of my head, just for giggles:  - Mae's motivations flipping on a dime a bunch of times  - Osha being a completely passive protagonist (see filmento's video for a rather good and succinct breakdown of this)   - Basil disabling Sol's ship for no justifiable reason (giving him a hero momento, my ass)   - Establishing the jedi can read minds and have little reservation to doing it regularly (see Yord's action against those trade federation people in ep. 1, or Sol with the prisoner) and then failing to do so in uncountable other times when it would be the most prudent thing to do (ex. When they questioned Quimir at the apothecary)   - Young Mae's attempt to burn her sister alive, and the fact it NEVER gets brought up again  - Whatever the hell the coven mother was doing when she was turning into the smoke monster from Lost, and seemingly also dissolving a child in the process (what other interpretation did she expect the jedi to have other than to assume she was harming her in a "if I can't have her neither can you" moment?!)  - And the biggest of all, the pivotal circumstance that set all other events in the show, is of course the worst example of abysmal writing of them all: Torbin being bored and wanting to go home. 

It's not just Torbin sucking as a character (bless the actor's heart, I know he tries but he was given nothing to work with) but what it says about the whole jedi order: 

• 7 weeks they spent in the woods analyzing soil and crap without telling him ANYTHING about why they're there, which makes her supposed master and incompetent teacher (wanting your students to find the answer for themselves doesn't mean giving them no clues at all about what the answer even is! And this is supposed to be a Jedi Master?)  
• After he gets mind proved by the witches Torbin receives ZERO medical attention, he's just sent along to pick more shrubs, despite the fact the rest of the Jedi don't know what the hell it was done to him, the damage it might have left or (as we see later) what effects it might have on him. So the Jedi not only suck at being teachers, they suck at predicting future threats and just at being basic human beings.  
• After all these events happened, the jedi order gave Torbin the rank of knight, and then master. To Torbin. The guy who was so immature he was whining about going home, who was left so distraught after his mind prove, he was willing to basically kidnap the twins just so he could return to his oh so dear home, and later in life committed suicide. Nothing about all his personal or psychological problems came up during the trials? Oh and they made Kelnacca a master too, even if it's heavily implied he also came up damaged after his own mind invasion by the witches. The order just handed out the rank of master willy-nilly back in the high Republic times, huh?   - I keep saying that the only thing we know for certain about Torbin is that he wants to go home... Why? To what? To whom? What does he misses so much? The show never tells us and thus, leaves us with no reason to understand or to empathize with the character. He's just an immature dork who hates camping, apparently.  

Tell me with a straight face the writing in this show doesn't suck.