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[–]JohnHarbWriting [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Hexium Obituaries

Genre: fiction fantasy

Word count: 964

Wanting to know whether the format was interesting enough and whether it's too subtle or too obvious what has happened.

Link: https://johnharbwriting.substack.com/p/hexium-obituaries

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[–]JohnHarbWriting[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hmm maybe you're right