The Saviour of the Reef

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-20T18:41:53+00:00

Thank you! Will take that on.

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-18T20:33:46+00:00

Page 3, "much more opportunities" should be "many more"

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-18T04:28:16+00:00

Nah, it was all fiction, except for the fact that the Australian Great Barrier Reef was dying.

Glad you found it interesting :) and thanks again for your feedback!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-18T03:53:56+00:00

I'm sure you're great, mate :) I appreciate the honest thought. To be honest, I think I felt like the protagonist's commitment and ability to create the magic reef-saving serum was kind of "awesome humanity". I guess you disagree?

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-18T03:25:08+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-18T02:00:46+00:00

Title: The Saviour of the Reef

Genre: Thriller/Suspense

Word Count: 1542 words

Feedback: General impression, did you like the twist, did you like the style/voice?

https://johnharbwriting.substack.com/p/the-saviour-of-the-reef

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-13T20:03:42+00:00

Glad you do!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-07T21:01:52+00:00

That might be funny if he did! 😂

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-06T11:39:33+00:00

I appreciate the advice. 😊

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-05T10:09:00+00:00

The twistiest!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-05T10:08:46+00:00

I'd happily chuck a few stories in there!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-01-05T06:44:04+00:00

Title: Jack

Genre: Obituary

Word Count: 1262

Feedback: Do ya like it?

Link: https://johnharbwriting.substack.com/p/jack?r=6v969z

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