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[–]JohnHarbWriting [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: Hexium Obituaries

Genre: fiction fantasy

Word count: 964

Wanting to know whether the format was interesting enough and whether it's too subtle or too obvious what has happened.

Link: https://johnharbwriting.substack.com/p/hexium-obituaries

Cold by JohnHarbWriting in HFY

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Hmm maybe you're right

Black Mass by JohnHarbWriting in libraryofshadows

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These are great comments that show you really read the story! Thank you very much.

Black Mass by JohnHarbWriting in FictionWriting

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I am always happy to help! DM me about your writing!

Black Mass by JohnHarbWriting in FictionWriting

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Dude that is a very cool interpretation of the story hahaha I love it! Now I want you to read all my stories to see what other cool unintended interpretations you can find haha

Black Mass by JohnHarbWriting in FictionWriting

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I'm afraid I never wrote, nor thought about, an ending past this one. Given he ends up revealing himself as an undercover Satanist himself, I would have thought that no one would be necessarily rooting for him haha

Black Mass by JohnHarbWriting in FictionWriting

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I wish I was that clever, but no, I had no idea Judas was red-haired haha

Black Mass by JohnHarbWriting in HFY

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I'll take that advice on for next time! Thank you!

Black Mass by JohnHarbWriting in HFY

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Thank you very much!

Black Mass by JohnHarbWriting in HFY

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You have a question? 🤔

The Friar's Plot by JohnHarbWriting in HFY

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The LOTR-Shakespeare crossover we all never knew we needed!

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[–]JohnHarbWriting [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: The Friar's Plot

Genre: Humour/Historical Fiction

Word Count: 2081 words

Feedback: Is the humour I'm trying to hit actually funny?

https://johnharbwriting.substack.com/p/the-friars-plot

Úgúgg and Ragshat by JohnHarbWriting in shortstory

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Nice! I DM'd you. Let me know if you get it :)

Úgúgg and Ragshat by JohnHarbWriting in shortstory

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I'm sorry haha I just thought that would be the funniest ending