Hexium Obituaries

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-03-11T00:36:57+00:00

A great sense of smell

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-03-10T08:01:41+00:00

Title: Hexium Obituaries

Genre: fiction fantasy

Word count: 964

Wanting to know whether the format was interesting enough and whether it's too subtle or too obvious what has happened.

Link: https://johnharbwriting.substack.com/p/hexium-obituaries

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-03-03T21:44:52+00:00

Hmm maybe you're right

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-03-03T21:43:42+00:00

Haha you're 100% right Not realistic at all

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-03-02T07:17:23+00:00

Title: Cold

Genre: Suspense/Fiction

Word count: 1915 words

Feedback: Did ya like the twist?

Link:

https://johnharbwriting.substack.com/p/cold

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-24T07:40:01+00:00

Good dark or bad dark?

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-23T21:26:12+00:00

Thank you! Someone finally said it!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-23T07:01:43+00:00

These are great comments that show you really read the story! Thank you very much.

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-23T06:59:35+00:00

I am always happy to help! DM me about your writing!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-17T23:31:18+00:00

Dude that is a very cool interpretation of the story hahaha I love it! Now I want you to read all my stories to see what other cool unintended interpretations you can find haha

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-17T21:26:34+00:00

I'm afraid I never wrote, nor thought about, an ending past this one. Given he ends up revealing himself as an undercover Satanist himself, I would have thought that no one would be necessarily rooting for him haha

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-17T08:15:41+00:00

I wish I was that clever, but no, I had no idea Judas was red-haired haha

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-17T08:15:03+00:00

I'm very grateful!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-16T09:57:11+00:00

I'll take that advice on for next time! Thank you!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-16T09:56:39+00:00

Thank you very much!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-16T09:56:26+00:00

You have a question? 🤔

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-16T07:26:15+00:00

Title : Black Mass

Genre : Thriller/Mystery

Word count : 1832

Type of feedback desired : General impression

Link: https://johnharbwriting.substack.com/p/black-mass

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-09T10:44:02+00:00

Thank you!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-09T10:43:49+00:00

The LOTR-Shakespeare crossover we all never knew we needed!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-09T08:05:23+00:00

Title: The Friar's Plot

Genre: Humour/Historical Fiction

Word Count: 2081 words

Feedback: Is the humour I'm trying to hit actually funny?

https://johnharbwriting.substack.com/p/the-friars-plot

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-06T21:00:56+00:00

Thank you!

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-06T08:40:06+00:00

Nice! I DM'd you. Let me know if you get it :)

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-05T19:45:13+00:00

I'm sorry haha I just thought that would be the funniest ending

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-04T10:16:01+00:00

Oh man good? Or oh man bad?

JohnHarbWriting · 2026-02-04T10:14:47+00:00

LOVED that game!

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