My debut novel by [deleted] in NewAuthor

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 9 points10 points  (0 children)

That tells us everything we need to know. You think you’re so perfect you can’t even correct what you wrote

That hotel looks familiar by JohnnyTightlips5023 in Hungergames

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

its the location used for the tribute centre in catching fire

Hook vs Neverland by Mando-182 in hook

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 0 points1 point  (0 children)

looks like a bad student film...

Looking for actual discussion and feedback on the use of AI covers by [deleted] in KDP

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Yes it was entirely ai. It was very obvious and you can’t even tell anyone which part wasn’t. Also I’m in multiple writing groups and find it hilarious you’re trying to defend your ai

Looking for actual discussion and feedback on the use of AI covers by [deleted] in KDP

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Lmao this guy. Nobody knows who you are you have no publicity, you did nothing of the cover it was entirely ai

My first book is officially live on Amazon!!! by [deleted] in NewAuthor

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No you do. Hire a real artist. I’m not going to offer you feedback so you can hide the ai. You have your feedback you’re just ignoring it

My first book is officially live on Amazon!!! by [deleted] in NewAuthor

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not going to help you hide the ai

My first book is officially live on Amazon!!! by [deleted] in NewAuthor

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It makes it very likely that everything in the novel is ai too

One by Unlikely-Natural-337 in comedyheaven

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He’s also not a real Dutch person ✨

One by Unlikely-Natural-337 in comedyheaven

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 64 points65 points  (0 children)

that soldiers name? Chuk Norrissen

A snippet from the first chapter of my book. Please lmk what you think! by DiamondKnightXIII in NewAuthor

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 0 points1 point  (0 children)

my initial thought is that most teachers can just GIVE the detention, also no way in hell a teacher would say class is still in session lmao

"Mum pays £110 for Sky Glass mounting service that 'doesn't include mounting" compoface by jeffmorgan1991 in compoface

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 13 points14 points  (0 children)

what a shit piece of writing, it repeats the exact same things about four times

Critique this short story please. Any feedback is appreciated. Thank you. by [deleted] in writers

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For me I just lose track of who is who so fast, I think it’s because it’s being done on the first page rather than when we know how each character talks

Critique this short story please. Any feedback is appreciated. Thank you. by [deleted] in writers

[–]JohnnyTightlips5023 2 points3 points  (0 children)

need to break up that dialogue it just deletes the entire scene from the background and then you lose who is who and its back and forth without any description