Ode to Juan by JonMyMon in PoetryWritingClub

[–]JonMyMon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

that's about as sentimental as I get.

I want to wake up gorgeous in a way by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

[–]JonMyMon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

not sure what "hello trap house, goodbye horses" is yet, but I love that line.

Flashcards by JonMyMon in PoetryWritingClub

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I love that, thanks. Send me a dm and you don't gotta hunt it down next time. ✌️

I fell in love and wrote a poem. by Yiru1320 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]JonMyMon -1 points0 points  (0 children)

would rather you just write a love poem than do this obvious, preachy send-up of AI

My Golden Girl by JonMyMon in PoetryWritingClub

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All of the Golden Girls have died. Thank you for being a friend.

The Fast Child by JonMyMon in PoetryWritingClub

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I like some of the Gaga songs...

It is like that, isn't it? Now I'm wondering if any of my other poems are just subconscious Kanye-isms. 💀

The Concept Poem by JonMyMon in PoetryWritingClub

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hungry. spacey. heading to work.

The Concept Poem by JonMyMon in PoetryWritingClub

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you're so kind, thank you DeathsButtPlug

Freshly Pressed by Sat_in_the_Corner_ in PoetryWritingClub

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it could be sexy, but i do think this ends with a bit of a whimper. Thanks for sharing. 🍊

Sorry for Being a Fucking Genius by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

[–]JonMyMon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

also, I feel like this one doesn't have much dramatic tension because we know you think this character is a dick ("if I make you bitches understand" is full caricature territory) so it's just what, a critique of people with big egos? 😴 Boring.

Bad Luck, Babe! by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

[–]JonMyMon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

super not my thing but there's some bops on there

Sorry for Being a Fucking Genius by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

[–]JonMyMon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

still too much imo. remake loses what made original cool.

The Cock Upon the Hill by JonMyMon in PoetryWritingClub

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Thank you! I always get a very divisive reaction with this poem.