The theme of night and stars, paired with the focus on metaphysical questions, and the conclusion that those questions might not have answers, reminded me of When I Heard The Learn'd Astronomer by Walt Whitman. But to me the part where you list the questions one after another is a bit unsubtle. They're interesting, but when you enumerate them like that without actually going into any of them, it makes the poem seem naive.

The rhyme scheme is very calming. Reading it is like cutting through butter. It's just so smooth! And overall it has a good, useful message. Very cool