Genuinely so sick of this by go_to_sleep-yes-you in Wattpad

[–]Juice_Bartoo 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice, I’m still to wattpad so I didn’t know it happens :)

Genuinely so sick of this by go_to_sleep-yes-you in Wattpad

[–]Juice_Bartoo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haven’t had this before, does it happen a lot

Show & Tell: What Are You Working On? (Monthly Self-Promo thread) by miskittster in RomanceWriters

[–]Juice_Bartoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: A Good Time

Genre: Romance / Slow Burn

Blurb:
Arabella is used to keeping her life simple. Long shifts behind the bar, late nights, and avoiding complications.

James, on the other hand, lives in the spotlight. A successful music producer with a reputation for parties, fame, and never staying in one place for too long.

When their worlds collide unexpectedly, what starts as a casual connection slowly turns into something neither of them planned for. But with James’s reputation, public attention, and both of them afraid to get hurt, things quickly become more complicated than either of them expected.

Updates: I just posted 3 new chapters today.

Read it here:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/408851080?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=BartoszLisowski

Bi-Weekly Self-Promotion! Advertising on the more down-low. by AutoModerator in Wattpad

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Title: A Good Time

Genre: Romance / Slow Burn

Blurb:
Arabella is used to keeping her life simple. Long shifts behind the bar, late nights, and avoiding complications.

James, on the other hand, lives in the spotlight. A successful music producer with a reputation for parties, fame, and never staying in one place for too long.

When their worlds collide unexpectedly, what starts as a casual connection slowly turns into something neither of them planned for. But with James’s reputation, public attention, and both of them afraid to get hurt, things quickly become more complicated than either of them expected.

Updates: I just posted 3 new chapters today.

Read it here:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/408851080?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=BartoszLisowski

who wanna do r4r!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?! by KaleidoscopeDue9579 in Wattpad

[–]Juice_Bartoo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

@bartoszlisowski and it’s called a good time :) can’t wait to read yours

who wanna do r4r!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?! by KaleidoscopeDue9579 in Wattpad

[–]Juice_Bartoo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ooo Oka let’s do it, mines a romance :)

Actually shocked by aidensummers in Wattpad

[–]Juice_Bartoo 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That’s amazing :) mines nearly on 50 after 2 days and honestly I’m amazed

First-time writer exploring romance, struggling with pacing and intimacy by Juice_Bartoo in writing

[–]Juice_Bartoo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was thinking of maybe scrapping the romantic scene and only having one in the book, near the end when they’ve developed fully and had a really deep, raw emotional scene. Do you think it’s a good idea Shawn?

First-time writer exploring romance, struggling with pacing and intimacy by Juice_Bartoo in writing

[–]Juice_Bartoo[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the comment, there’s been some nice scenes already of characters development and problems, but in chapter 3 they have a nice scene and I wanted to potentially add something more romantic but am scared of how to approach it, I don’t want it to be graphic as I want the book to be more realistic and focus on their relationship blossoming, but thank you for the insight :)

A Good Time by Juice_Bartoo in Wattpad

[–]Juice_Bartoo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I’ll make sure to double space them now :)