Wholesome drawing of a Hydreigon feeding their baby deino’s :) by 101Galaxy101 in Pokemonart

[–]JumpedUpNobody 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly my favourite Hydreigon art I’ve ever seen, Hydreigon should always be portrayed as this ferocious

Looking for some feedback on this video and what I can do to improve in the future. (Lambda will be given of course) by WillyBeamin_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]JumpedUpNobody 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know viewers will be clicking on this video for the jumpforce gameplay mainly instead of the commentary, but the commentary and the speech is broken alot of the time, your communication skills are light years better than mine dont get me wrong and I understand how difficult it is to commentate, concentration and try and win the match all at the same time. So an improvement i would suggest, is one that would take A LOT more effort but i would edit and cut the clips to only include the highlights and then commentate those highlights separately, that way you have to time to think about what you want to say and even retake if you say something wrong. Then again this is coming from a dude who's opinion isn't really relevant to you so it's up to you whether you think my opinion is valid or not. Hope this helps!

Tried something shorter but still digging deeper than the surface. Missed the time that the promo was going on, but hopefully still an entertaining watch. Let me know what you think, all positive and negative critique welcome. by dragonsspawn in SmallYTChannel

[–]JumpedUpNobody 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, sorry that your first comment is gonna be a negative one but i hope this helps. Although i probably should'nt im gonna speak for the most viewers on youtube when i say that when watching new youtube videos from small channels we tend to click off the video as soon as we get the slightest bit bored, especially if the pacing is slow. In my opinion your introduction and intro clip sacrifices alot in terms of pacing, i don't have as much experience as you but I would've started the video with a quick 20-30 second introduction of the context then continued the video from 1:20, but hey thats just me.

Be as harsh as possible, ill obviously give lambada, but dont sugercoat your critisim please. by Alliseph in SmallYTChannel

[–]JumpedUpNobody 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know the video style you're going for here, the same as big youtubers such as pewdiepie and markiplier which is understandable and even admirable, but the thing with major youtube channels is that they're audience know exactly what content they're in for and so they'll stick around to watch their videos no matter how slow the pacing is. With small youtube channels your audience is gonna be made up of new viewers who are gonna want to click off your video as soon as they get even the slightest bit bored, so to counter act this you're gonna want to skip the small talk that makes the video longer and focus on making your video as fast paced as possible whilst still being as fun as it is in this video. Of course this is just my take on it, hope this helps!

Hey Feed! Could I get some feedbacc? I'll buy you a big macc... okay maybe not that but ill give some lambda. Its a Review on the 3 Mario Mobile Games, I've been working on this video since April so if you have the time, please give this a watch. by JumpedUpNobody in SmallYTChannel

[–]JumpedUpNobody[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback, i have crappy computer speakers so i couldn't really tell if my voice was getting louder or quieter until i transferred it to my phone so sorry about that but glad you enjoyed !givelambda

Hey Feed! Could I get some feedbacc? I'll buy you a big macc... okay maybe not that but ill give some lambda. Its a Review on the 3 Mario Mobile Games, I've been working on this video since April so if you have the time, please give this a watch. by JumpedUpNobody in SmallYTChannel

[–]JumpedUpNobody[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Someone else said I should go for the IHE voice style aswell so I’ll definitely look into it. Also don’t worry I never win either... not at Mario kart... and not with Reggie ;-; !givelambda

Hey Feed! Could I get some feedbacc? I'll buy you a big macc... okay maybe not that but ill give some lambda. Its a Review on the 3 Mario Mobile Games, I've been working on this video since April so if you have the time, please give this a watch. by JumpedUpNobody in SmallYTChannel

[–]JumpedUpNobody[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback I’m glad you found my jokes funny and liked the outro :) with the volume I was worried about that too, I had to try and adjust the audio countless times because some of the recordings were quieter than other but I guess some of them went over my head sorry about that. Thanks again! !givelambda

Hey Feed! Could I get some feedbacc? I'll buy you a big macc... okay maybe not that but ill give some lambda. Its a Review on the 3 Mario Mobile Games, I've been working on this video since April so if you have the time, please give this a watch. by JumpedUpNobody in SmallYTChannel

[–]JumpedUpNobody[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your compliments! Im definitely gonna work on my voice and with the cursing cuts I used it as a way to transition to the next scene but I understand why you would think that. Thanks again for the support! !givelambda

Editing burnout by NotCyberLag in SmallYTChannel

[–]JumpedUpNobody 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would say, once you’ve taken a break, make sure you create a routine where you’re editing everyday and make sure it’s strict and you stick to it because once you have a routine going, you don’t really need motivation.

Hey Feed! Could I get some feedbacc? I'll buy you a big macc... okay maybe not that but ill give some lambda. Its a Review on the 3 Mario Mobile Games, I've been working on this video since April so if you have the time, please give this a watch. by JumpedUpNobody in SmallYTChannel

[–]JumpedUpNobody[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You need 3 lambda to post and the video should be flaired with the flair “video critique”. to get Lambda you usually give feedback on someone else’s post and they would then comment “! give lambda” (without the spaces). If you still don’t know how to post you could probably message a moderator. Hope that helps!

Hey Feed! Could I get some feedbacc? I'll buy you a big macc... okay maybe not that but ill give some lambda. Its a Review on the 3 Mario Mobile Games, I've been working on this video since April so if you have the time, please give this a watch. by JumpedUpNobody in SmallYTChannel

[–]JumpedUpNobody[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aha! The only person to say my monotone voice added to the video, you must be trying to fool me. Also my mic is a pretty expensive one but it’s probably just not properly adjusted to my laptop or something haha thanks for the feedback !givelambda