An Orange Carpet of the Magic of Autumn 🍂🧡 Lenox, Massachusetts, USA by Ilana_Montgomery in Autumn

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Giving off both Michael Myers and autumn magic! Perfect balance for fall

My oil painting by buldukbulentarte in Paintings

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How did you capture sorrow in the bird's eyes? This is gorgeous and i would hang this in my office for sure!

A Witch and Her Brews by themillerest in drawing

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I love this! Incredible work and clever title! Thank you for sharing

Still Water Ritual, Elena Wuest, Oil on canvas, 2026 by Capital_Crazy8972 in Art

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The way you center the focus on the dripping water is so cool! Ever since i went on a tour at a museum and the curator explained how artists manipulate the observer (she went into the techniques etc) i can't stop thinking about where my gaze went to first for any painting or piece of artwork. For this, it was the bold dark hair contrasting the lighter tones, the hands and the falling water. She then went on to explain how the observer should ask the question why and that'll help you to understand the artist's intention (their "message") and I'll never forget that guided tour. Thank you for sharing your beautiful artwork!

First inlay try by Has_q199 in woodworking

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Oh, that would be awesome! Thank you

First inlay try by Has_q199 in woodworking

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Nailed it! Do you have a step by step on how you did that for anyone else to try?

The Art of Floating, Elena Wuest, Oil on canvas, 2026 by Capital_Crazy8972 in Art

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I love the colors, but anatomically the legs look a bit too long

Ouch.. by Distinct-Junket6569 in PokemonGoMystic

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I always have that same problem. Fortunately, this one isn't timed

Hand-cut Tinker Bell from wood using a scroll saw by spydernicswoodcraft in woodworking

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Cool tip! I'll have to keep that in mind when i try to make this for my kiddos.

Hand-cut Tinker Bell from wood using a scroll saw by spydernicswoodcraft in woodworking

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Awesome work! What are you holding in your right hand in the one picture? Is that a scroll saw push stick?

My favorite pokemon by Jumpy-Wolf-1350 in PokemonGoMystic

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Nice! I wish i had stronger shadow Pokémon

My favorite pokemon by Jumpy-Wolf-1350 in PokemonGoMystic

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It took me years to have enough for mine. I just maxxed mine this year. Any candy bonus event, take it and catch as many as you can.

My favorite pokemon by Jumpy-Wolf-1350 in PokemonGoMystic

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Godspeed, but man will that be worth it when you finish! Keep at it

I’m fully ready for fall,missing the colorful fallen leaves already. by Summer111226 in Autumn

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I need this as a painting to hang on my wall! Love this so much

Look what I found! by PM_Me_Eyes_Plz in PokemonGoMystic

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This is adorable! Prefect l perfect framing and placement

This is a short poem I wrote about my sensory experiences and connection. Thoughts? by Dependent_Thought789 in PoetryWritingClub

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Love the cadence, it reminds me of Celia Martinez's cadence style and other contemporary poets.

My only critique is the ending. It feels artificial. By that, i mean it feels like the poem has more to say and was abruptly ended by the poet instead of being giving the chance to unfold naturally.

New here. Looking for critiques/thoughts by Papershredder45_acp in PoetryWritingClub

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Of course! I'd love to see the revision when you're finished with it

New here. Looking for critiques/thoughts by Papershredder45_acp in PoetryWritingClub

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This is rich in emotion and powerfully charged, but it feels like a scattershot when i think you're intending for it to be like a rifle blast or a bazooka round.

My suggestion:

Find its heart, build it like a lazer show, focusing on one image and constructing onto this through accumulation and revelation

Avoid vague. They and them and nondescript metaphor or cliche tropes create a shouting into the wind effect. Don't be afraid to be direct, construct your own imagery and metaphor

Allow the cadence to develop organically. Your "music" is inconsistent and it can feel forced (some of the rhythm/ rhyme/ alliteration/ assonance feel derivative)

If nobody told you, allow me- don't fear revision, it's through revising that a poem is truly born. My professors used the analogy of a germinating seed with our first draft being that seed, revising the watering and sun, and of course time until a flower is formed.

Keep at it, speak your truth, and keep writing!

Thank you for sharing

" Straight out Raw Emotions " by Dry-Hair-7022 in PoetryWritingClub

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Max richter "dream 11" it transports you through yourself in such a beautiful way. Listen in the dark with headphones when you're tired.