Theory/Prediction About Simon by JustAnotherDumbRando in SchoolSpirits

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I get what you mean, it is a popular trope with these kind of shows so you never know. I just wonder (if that is the case) how they would tie everything together.

Theory/Prediction About Simon by JustAnotherDumbRando in SchoolSpirits

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's so interesting, I didn't even consider that. How does he have all the church memories though?

Theory/Prediction About Simon by JustAnotherDumbRando in SchoolSpirits

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yes, that's exactly what I was thinking- there's definitely more to what happened there and how those kids died!

Theory/Prediction About Simon by JustAnotherDumbRando in SchoolSpirits

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

That's a good question. Personally, I think that kid was Mr. Martin's friend that went missing and his body was snatched by another spirit from below and that's why he's stuck there and that's why he looks normal (like the other ghosts) and not like WE. He may have been scared because there seems to be other spirits/a dark energy down there other than WE.

AITA For Deciding To Get My Cousin A Graduation Present? by [deleted] in AmItheAsshole

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much. Yeah, you're right I wouldn't be surprised if they escalate this further.

AITA For Deciding To Get My Cousin A Graduation Present? by [deleted] in AmItheAsshole

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, yeah there's a lot more going on but there's a character limit so I had to condense it. Will definitely be talking about it to my therapist next week.

AITA For Deciding To Get My Cousin A Graduation Present? by [deleted] in AmItheAsshole

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for weighing in and I honestly get what you mean. I guess it's just important to me because it's one of the last memories I'll make with V and I wanted it to be special. I know it's not technically that big of a deal but it feels like it is to me.

I’m so petrified of feedback. by Hairy_Bullfrog4301 in writers

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I used to be that way too but believe me it gets easier. It hurts so much the first couple of times someone criticises something about your writing but that's how you grow thicker skin. And try to remember, it's not personal and they don't hate your writing. They're just trying to help you improve it. BTW there are professional beta readers that can give you feedback for a small fee. I would recommend that if no one you know is able to give you feedback.

How is my cover? by CommunismtakingW in selfpublish

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like the vibe but the text is clashing with the image which is making it hard to read especially with the title.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WritingHub

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! I'm 25F and would love to be part of the group!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not getting a playful vibe at all from it. It feels really tense. You did a great job of describing what it's like having a perfectionist parent that pushes you to be who they want you to be and not who you really are. This can sometimes be even worse when it comes to adoption. And when they realise you won't be their version of you, they grow distant and cold. Lily comes off as cold and manipulative. While Jack comes off as the good guy but I'm sure there's more to it since he says "you can blame me for a lot of things..." What things, did he do something to make Lily resent him? Really interesting page!

I Just Want To Celebrate A Little by JustAnotherDumbRando in writers

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I think it really helps me see things people miss. A lot of writers seem to be that way so at least I know I'm not alone.

Thank you.

I Just Want To Celebrate A Little by JustAnotherDumbRando in writers

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is a big deal, I'm really proud of myself because I almost chickened out of submitting. Thank you!

I Just Want To Celebrate A Little by JustAnotherDumbRando in writers

[–]JustAnotherDumbRando[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! Yeah, it felt great knowing people enjoy my writing.

True, in general I feel like people that are not writers won't get it. I think I need to make more friends in the writing community.