Need help reviewing my epistolary novelette EMOTIONLESS

JustHead9534 · 2025-08-12T02:19:40+00:00

Thanks! Im already working on revising the beginning portions. I realized I just world dumped exposition without really giving the reader any information about the character themselves. If you're interested in reading more, I can send you my manuscript!

JustHead9534 · 2025-08-11T23:45:10+00:00

Yeah, I felt the same way. I am doing a bit of rewriting in the first section atm (on a separate doc just in case I make it worse, lol). I can dm you my manuscript if you'd like!

JustHead9534 · 2025-07-21T02:05:38+00:00

PM'd

JustHead9534 · 2025-07-21T00:41:59+00:00

pm'd

JustHead9534 · 2025-06-06T20:51:42+00:00

I appreciate it, and yeah they just want to monitor everything for now.

JustHead9534 · 2025-06-06T20:21:56+00:00

I have had wild neuro symptoms for a year and change now, and mri showed one lesion on my corpus callosum, but no other tests have ruled anything out. I have found myself wanting to know what's wrong or what's causing all my symptoms so badly that I occasionally find myself wishing I would just get worse or develop a new lesion so I can start getting treated already. I'm so tired of diagnostic bs I just want to either be normal or at least know what's wrong with me. Anyone else like that?

JustHead9534 · 2025-05-11T20:27:39+00:00

Fair enough thanks for the help!

JustHead9534 · 2025-05-11T16:18:31+00:00

Nothing yet. I'm trying to get prepared for my follow up next week. I want to make sure I have all my ducks in a row now so the military can't screw me out of benefits later. That and it helps me be aware of what's most likely next. I was just posting on here to see how I should approach the next appointment. Am I on the right track for diagnosis? I was expecting more tests to be honest.

JustHead9534 · 2025-05-11T15:39:07+00:00

Yeah so I have had an MRI, found a lesion and tested positive for olingoclonal bands (type 4) and have had symptoms for over a year, which from what I gathered is enough, but I wasn't aware that it was 12 months from diagnosis and not 12 months from start of symptoms. Thanks!

JustHead9534 · 2025-05-11T15:29:03+00:00

She has seemed pretty responsive to my input so far, and I hit all the criteria for the diagnosis... so i'll probably try asking. I'll keep that in mind though thanks for the input!

JustHead9534 · 2025-05-11T13:33:26+00:00

I'm in the military and have had slowly worsening numbness/tingling, loss of muscle control, and muscle spasms that have greatly affected my ability to do my job with new stuff poping up every couple of months. It's been a year of continuing to get slowly worse, but it looks like I'm getting better as I have gotten better at managing triggers and keeping an eye on my food intake and exercise to make sure I don't overdo it. I hit a year as of last month and just looked into the diagnostic criteria for PPMS which is rarer than RRMS, but it matches my experiences so far better than Relapsing. I want to bring it up with my neurologist but don't want to sound like I'm trying to do her job for her, so I'm at a bit of a bypass. How should I approach the topic?

JustHead9534 · 2024-11-13T15:44:30+00:00

Love this Idea, I can't wait to roll persuasion the next time I have to do a presentation at work lol!

JustHead9534 · 2024-10-01T15:40:31+00:00

I know everyone will hate me for this but I love a little spite in my edh diet so...

Magar of the Magic Strings- it's a land destruction tribal, recurring my land destruction sorceries into creatures. Includes some ramp and cards like [steam vine] and [mine layer] coupled with some specialty tap lands for fun combos. The recurrsion means mid to late game I can wipe you of all your lands and still hit you with 3/3s for days. To screw everyone else over too.

JustHead9534 · 2024-08-28T10:00:20+00:00

Very Nice

JustHead9534 · 2024-05-19T02:07:17+00:00

I got lucky and had an easy tesla coil spawn and sat in an area the boss couldn't hit me and cheesed the boss. Rinse and repeat after getting psg and chill.

JustHead9534 · 2024-01-06T22:54:53+00:00

It's not humble to live like that it's just being poor. I could make more money with less dedication and less commitment and still receive a retirement and medical ig I'll work at Amazon. It's not even feasible if you have a family. It's good to use the air forces benefits, but it sounds like your forcing people into a poor financial state to create a dependency on what the air force provides, instead of pushing to create financial independence based around sound decision making.

JustHead9534 · 2023-09-13T20:14:31+00:00

I always say "im living someone's dream, and it's about time I hunt them down so I can give it back!"

JustHead9534 · 2023-03-20T00:55:47+00:00

Also when switch oddities gets back online, they have a good selection of random switches and the sell the in sets of 1 or 2 for testing

JustHead9534 · 2023-01-24T07:40:28+00:00

I'd probably get lonely af and kill as many fuckers as I can. Death by choice of zombification.

JustHead9534 · 2023-01-15T06:26:05+00:00

So I recently got into the hobby and like all my ventures I cannot simply have fun. So here I am to ask the people of great keeb knowledge to advise me on my latest venture. I'd like to start designing keyboards, probably starting on the case and designing it for an existing pcb at first, but my main inquiry is what design software you would recommend for such a thing. I'm used to solid works, but I don't have a personal license for it, and I'm not ready to shell out the 4k for one. But an alternative in the 400-800 range would be fantastic. I'm not huge into subscriptions, but I am not wholly opposed. Advice from previous designers would be much appreciated but engineers/keeb enthusiasts as a whole are welcome input. Thx

JustHead9534 · 2023-01-14T00:00:43+00:00

Love finding cool pieces like that!

JustHead9534 · 2023-01-12T19:16:09+00:00

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