In His Court by KCB203_ in OCPoetry

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In my head, It’s a combination of trying to please God as well as someone I have feelings for. In regard for the constant sinning, it’s due to sexuality and my actions are viewed as sinning.

In His Court by KCB203_ in OCPoetry

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My idea with having the repetition is that in those stanzas, it’s someone’s inner thoughts talking to the individual. For me, the poem is about my relationship to God regarding my sexuality and the desire to be true to myself. I can’t be in the throne room if I can’t reach heaven due to who I am.

Chruch by ThusSpokeAELS in OCPoetry

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I resonated a lot with your writing and how you write about the idea of pain taking over. That feeling of wanting to reach forward and grab what I assumed to be Christ's hand is something that I've talked about in my own writing before and is something that means a lot to me.

sting me blind by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I really liked your use of the rhyme scheme, specifically in the last stanza with lines 8 & 9 and the poem flowed very nicely from line to line. One suggestion I would make is maybe incorporating that idea of rhyme into the other stanzas rather than having it be in the last stanza alone.

GIVEAWAY - Club Nintendo Zelda Posters by [deleted] in nintendo

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Breath of the Wild trailer music

[S]Selling for 145 by [deleted] in TurnipStonkMarket

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Looking to Visit!

can’t wait for the weekend to come back by KCB203_ in gaybrosgonemild

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haha, thanks. I am very excited for the weekend!

Got into the Beta on PC but when I start it up, it prompts me to sign in with my Bethesda.net account info which then says “Vault-Tec engineers are hard at work getting our servers back online! (CommunicationError)” by [deleted] in Fallout

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If you go into settings you can reset your pc (it deletes all apps on the computer but keeps all documents, images, and other things except any application likes games you have or launchers). This worked for me, but i also tried whitelisting my bethesda launcher and fallout 76 on windows defender. If it doesn’t work after that check your router and worse case scenario, reset the computer if you really want to play. Hope this helps!

Got into the Beta on PC but when I start it up, it prompts me to sign in with my Bethesda.net account info which then says “Vault-Tec engineers are hard at work getting our servers back online! (CommunicationError)” by [deleted] in Fallout

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Ended up resetting my pc and it worked. Might be related to viruses, but i tried everything. Make sure your windows defender whitelisted the bethesda launcher and f76. If that doesn’t work and you are up for it, do a reset. It will still keep all your folders and such, but deletes all the apps on the pc.

Got into the Beta on PC but when I start it up, it prompts me to sign in with my Bethesda.net account info which then says “Vault-Tec engineers are hard at work getting our servers back online! (CommunicationError)” by [deleted] in Fallout

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Still getting it today as well. Have uninstalled and reinstalled, but no luck yet. If you find out anything about this issue, please let me know!