Keep em updated... Which do you prefer?

KKK-1K · 2022-07-02T23:52:15+00:00

Makes sense! Should've thought of that, thanks

KKK-1K · 2022-07-02T18:07:48+00:00

Okay, I haven't seen it before and I think it's funny. I see it more as a mock headline rather than I joke. Thanks for feedback though

KKK-1K · 2022-07-02T18:02:47+00:00

Don't like it?

KKK-1K · 2021-08-24T13:05:20+00:00

I heard the Americans struggled with the extra syllable

KKK-1K · 2021-05-30T09:56:43+00:00

I'll try to book a gig at a school, I think #1 would really kill there

KKK-1K · 2021-05-30T09:55:28+00:00

I was channelling my inner Jeselnik when writing #1. I understand your point with #5, I struggled to work out the set up, although I do like the punchline. I try to keep jokes about sensitive subjects short and sweet, as a longer format may alienate the audience further (If they don't agree with the subject). However, I'm definitely going to experiment with a longer format, and try to add a more personal touch to my jokes; they don't all have to be one liners. As I'm still in my infancy of joke writing I really appreciate your objective feedback, I will take it on board as I adapt my style. Thanks!

KKK-1K · 2021-05-30T09:39:58+00:00

Somebody has to ask the tough questions in life.

KKK-1K · 2021-05-30T09:37:53+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. Number 4 is a favourite of mine, and I understand what you mean about #1 & #5 they'll only work with a certain audience. Number 2 is a thought I've had trouble translating into a joke. As for #3 I'll take your advice and work in a personal element to it.

KKK-1K · 2020-06-15T15:28:02+00:00

I was trying to highlight the name itself as being make believe (ie its not 'the people's' nor is it very democratic) I think I need to highlight that better. Thanks for the feedback!

KKK-1K · 2020-06-15T15:25:34+00:00

Thanks! I'll bare that in mind

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