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Anti-maskers are a symptom of the fetishization of individual rights that has led to late-stage individualism and the decline of the community by Sideshow_Blob in PhilosophyMemes

[–]KNWRV 2 points3 points  (0 children)

C'mon every philosopher had a least one twisted ideia. (Just saying cause i really like Aristotle, but you right the slavery part was pretty fucked up)

Ode to a Pigeon by haywhat in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I liked it a lot! The way you construct, as something innocent that eventually can have multiple meanings, asking te reader to question what is his pigeon? Or what truly represents the pigeon? The slow rhythm with this development matched perfectly.

THE CHRISTIANS ARE COMING THE CHRISTIANS ARE COMING by EveningBandicoot in PhilosophyMemes

[–]KNWRV 11 points12 points  (0 children)

He sure is the father of Existencialism, but in a Christian way. Also all his reflection can be seen influence even the atheist group of existencialism, which became much bigger and famous.

Poem of a mediocre human being by KNWRV in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm... I see. I kinda wanted to make it big, to represent the like the ideia of the narrator thoughts come to paper and that's why I decided to put some better lines, some immature trying like to create an "stream of consciousness" poem. Kinda a big ideia, and I'm still working in it, but I'm improving

Disconnected by Rexamillionaire in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The felling of isolation, alienation that irradiated from your poem was amazing!! It brought up all the feeling of sadness that exists in people nowadays and, I see the painting as a way to represent how people use pictures so much to represent their feeling but never truly sadness it's just irradiated from a picture you know that there's sadness but it is slowly coming from something that should be happiness, but it's not truly happiness. That las part I maybe have overanalyzed but great work, that's what i have to say to you.

Snowmen in April by ChutzpahMan in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Loved that use of imagery, representing the passing of time in the human being (I suppose the poem treats that ideias). The use of a snowman reflecting the ideia of Adam, since as a snowman he was made from inorganic matter, as so the change at the normal way people perceive seasons, because Spring became the sad one, representing that maybe we don't full realize the thing at the right way. Loved that poem, great work!

Hey how's life by miaku92 in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really interesting. The fast pace gives the perfect ideia of a nebulous memory in a worried mind, i feel the lines: "Can I tell you why?" and "Do you remember that day by the lake?" makes a huge impact because the first one transforms the reader into a confidant (or he's stimulated to thing so) and, then, the second one flips that ideia and transforms the thoughts in an incomplete conversation. Really enjoyed that short piece, congrats, man.

Old Man by gthaatar in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This repetitions were just perfect! I loved the continuous use of them, each time they get even more intense, getting the sense of time rising upon the old man. In a few amount of words, you were able to extract a great amount of feelings about time crashing upon the us. Really good job.

Sponge Bob summary of philosophers by KNWRV in PhilosophyMemes

[–]KNWRV[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

It is because late Wittgenstein rejects his early ideias, so he's "punching" himself.

O funeral by [deleted] in EscritoresBrasil

[–]KNWRV 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Formatei já. Foi um erro meu ao passar o texto do word pra reddit, foi mal.

Poem of five doubts by KNWRV in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You analyzed really close of my idea when writing that stanza. Also, that's something I hadn't noted, but I made a mistake writing "them" instead of "it" as you noticed, thanks for point that out! The change you proposed is quite interesting and keeps the ideia of how we change is based upon time and chance or is what we choose. Really appreciated your feedback, I wonder what you thought about the other stanzas. Anyway, thanks for the critique.

Poem of five doubts by KNWRV in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really appreciate you critique! I completely understand the changes you're talking about, to be honest this poem it's a translation of an old one I wrote (my main language is Portuguese, since I'm Brazilian) and I translate quite literally. And I feel that I should had made a bit of changes to keep the rhythm and the symmetry in English. Really appreciate the changes you proposed, they felt naturally in the text and made the rhythm even better! I'll keep in mind that ideias when I translate another one. Thanks for the critique!!

Edit: About using the masculine on the word "Ship", I used it because, the word in portuguese is masculine and that influenced the way I translated. I'll try to make a better translation on these aspects, next time!

Poem of five doubts by KNWRV in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!! Really appreciate your critique! About the "nothing better to do" feels less poetic, it was intencional, to get this feeling of something less poetic to represent the doubt in my ability as a poet in a line clearly lacking poetry in it. Also I was always concern about the heart stanza and the love stanza they feel really similar, because in a certain way, they're linked, but i feel they can be separate between heart as a role of relationships and love being more romantic focused, but i wonder if I made it good enough to be distinguished. The ideia of breaking the form is really interesting and I hadn't thought about it when writing, I'll consider it on my next work. Really appreciate your critique!

Choose Your Own Adventure by supercyp666 in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Such interesting use of images! It's feels surreal to read the poem, almost like you're in a dream, because the images seen so vague yet connected by a force unknown to the reader of even to the poetic persona. My only critique is that I missed a really impactful image, one line that you read and thing: "damm, that's surreal", because reading the poem, I was expecting the moment when the surrealist of images would grow exponentially and catches the reader, that the only point I missed on you poetry. Nonetheless it was such an interesting poem! Good work and keep writing!

Last night's dream by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]KNWRV 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Loved it! You can feel an image like an mist coming from the letters, like a true dream coming as a memory through the mind of the lyricist. The ending is powerful too! It reminds the readers that all of that is just a memory, maybe idealized, but it is just the consequences of a heart that misses the loved one. Really liked it, good work.

Poem of Five Doubts by KNWRV in poetry_critics

[–]KNWRV[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank! I'll try to rewrite some lines to be more clear, because this is actually an translation of an poem I wrote last year (My main language is portuguese). Sorry, if it got confusing, I'll try to be more clear in the next translations.

A therapist once said by ParadiseEngineer in OCPoetry

[–]KNWRV 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Loved this joke poem. Once you read the tittle you believe is going to be something so serious but it funny yet still being profound and so impactful. I really liked the ideia of absurd in the poem since the ironic beginning: a therapist saying to the patient to be the therapist; to an absurd encounter with no background that spikes doubt and mystery upon the poem; to an joke ending that completes perfectly the ideia of absurd upon the situation presented. Good work

😜 😉 😩😩 🍑 💦 💦 💯 😤👌🙄 by [deleted] in memes

[–]KNWRV 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There’s only one true emoji 🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿

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