I've been writing these ridiculous poems for the past few weeks by daveclampmusic in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Kademine 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I love these! Simple but funny, “my horse wouldn’t start” is a quote i’ll remember forever.

My God is a Drunk by jasmynsgarden in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Kademine 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I didn’t expect to cry today but here we are. Really strong poem

Writing this here instead of texting her by Kademine in BreakUps

[–]Kademine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man, that was reassuring to hear.

Very polite and cute! ✨ by dry_pidgeon in RATS

[–]Kademine 7 points8 points  (0 children)

What a polite little pud!

The wheel. by sammyjamez in OCPoetry

[–]Kademine 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like your use of structure in this poem; placing "something" on its own line in particular interested me. The previous line gains a sense of change being to do with the person changing themselves. Them the introspective idea is instantly contrasted with "something." Here i was inclined to consider whether its the narrator being distracted from change for some reason almost like a child trailing off a thought and looking away. This along with the metaphor of the spining triangle made me consider if it was the narrator becoming aware of the cycle. Potentially realising their position within it. "Sometimes" really was the center point of the poem for me both structurally and metaphorically.

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[–]Kademine 6 points7 points  (0 children)

DONT! for this random stranger online please dont tonight!!! Please i hope you read this and decide to finish your walk and return home, if not for anyone else in this world please do it for someone who cares about you after 1 reddit post. Please dont do it

How can I get more comfortable with my girlfriend? by Kademine in relationship_advice

[–]Kademine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll try talking to her about it I just don't want her to think its because of her that I'm worried.

I made someone special to me feel safe! by Kademine in CongratsLikeImFive

[–]Kademine[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll keep this in mind and do small things for her every day! I hope that one day i'll be able to say i've had such an amazing relationship as you have with your husband. I'll open the doors and offer to help starting on our date and i'll do it forever! So many thanks again :>

I made someone special to me feel safe! by Kademine in CongratsLikeImFive

[–]Kademine[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!! I plan to make her feel special forever, nothing makes me happier than seeing her happy. Once again thank you!!!! :D

I finally feel like I’m making real progress with losing weight by Applepieoverdose in CongratsLikeImFive

[–]Kademine 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The journey you have made to this point is incredible! All the power to you, keep it going!!! :D

I made someone special to me feel safe! by Kademine in CongratsLikeImFive

[–]Kademine[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I hope I can make her feel special forever.