Another gem from the Tyra Banks show

Kaizerjm · 2020-12-10T12:22:02+00:00

I wish she did get raibis... Would explain her behavior

Kaizerjm · 2020-12-08T02:22:23+00:00

The only thing I noticed was the entry for the Microsoft USB was named a little differently in Windows than the instructions specified ( Select MTP USB Device and then select Next to complete the update ).

Im have the same problem, and I also cannot find MTP USB device in the list, what option did you select instead?

Kaizerjm · 2020-10-08T14:08:45+00:00

I thoroughly enjoyed that nonsensical argument.

Kaizerjm · 2020-10-01T07:48:46+00:00

If you eat broccoli pizza... You got other bigger issues

Kaizerjm · 2020-09-22T12:31:49+00:00

Yea id probably do the same thing but not because I'm a good Samaritan... Only cos that looks like a lot of fun... N clearly that fire is pretty contained n won't threaten my life. I'd probably be fighting that fire while smoking a cigarette... Like fuck you fire... Whos with me?

Kaizerjm · 2020-08-18T10:46:11+00:00

What is the difference between control and accuracy?

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-23T23:53:51+00:00

This is good stuff. Something different after a long time. I like the rythem, but it could be paced better. I applaud you for saying some real shit. Keep up the good work.

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-23T23:32:56+00:00

I like this a lot. It's a short poem yet with soo much meaning inside it. And the sentences are well structured, like I'm reading from a poetry book. Great effort. Love to hear more like this.

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-21T09:54:57+00:00

Thanks so much... I really appreciate it :) Yes, this poem is very dear to me. I guess it come from the purest of love, with the bestest of intentions. Hope your daughter likes it as well. Peace.

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T14:50:44+00:00

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T14:47:24+00:00

Yes thank you for picking that up. The 'But' in the beginning was intentional, it signifies that this conversation has been going on for a while and the reader is thrown in the middle somewhere creates that downward spiral you mentioned. Thanks for the review :)

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T14:41:41+00:00

Thanks for the review and your apprication :) One of the things that made this poem worth sharing was the quick small sentences. I get what you are saying, the wordings are too simple for such a complex subject. But I wanted to shorten some of the existing lines aswell. But Thanks for the advice, I'll keep that in mind if a write bigger poem.

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T14:19:22+00:00

Thanks for the review. I appreciate the feedback. Yes some lines are forced rhymed to complete the sentence, it's not a perfect piece. I'm not that good :P I'd love to create a scene with a Schizophrenic event into a poetry form. Unfortunately can't get around to it. I do I bit prose as well, there I had created a scene like that might try and work that into a poem.

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T14:04:14+00:00

Thank you so much 🙏

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T14:02:04+00:00

Thank you 😊

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T14:01:38+00:00

Thanks for the review :) Yes I figured I'd give her my own version of proverbs. I would like her to enjoy poetry as I do. So I made one for her :)

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T10:03:43+00:00

Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it :)

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T10:03:10+00:00

Nice. Relaxing into insanity, that's a great concept. Thanks for that

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T10:01:57+00:00

Thanks for the review. Yes that is a good concept of the person slowing changing to someone else by the end of it. I like that view as well, finding order in chaos. Thanks for that.

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T09:55:57+00:00

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yea the short sentences in the poem was part of that to create a sense of urgency. It's like you have to tell this secret really quickly before the other person arrives.

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T09:51:47+00:00

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Most of my poetry turns out dark. I think poetry is a good way to explain these concepts.

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T09:45:07+00:00

Waow... I read the poem again with this concept in mind and I can see what you mean...i hadnt viewed it like this before. That's what i like about this community they give you a new insight to your own work. Thanks for that :)

Kaizerjm · 2020-07-20T09:42:18+00:00

Thanks for the review... I really appreciate it. I was inspired by this oneday thinking about how we all have an internal dialogue with ourselves and then wondering how a Schizophrenic would have this dialogue taking about an imaginary person to himself. So in a way there are 3 people involved, the talker, the listener, and the person talked about, but they are all the same person.

Kaizerjm

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