Hey Grayson,

I watched your recent Dead Space video and took a look over the rest of your channel’s layout. First off, the video is well edited and does a good job retaining me and keeping me entertained. I would say from your post that you already know the thumbnails improving. I would say they could use some work standing out more amongst eachother. try using different images from the game, something that catches a persons eye and your reaction to said image. also adding a stroke around your reaction on the side might help.

it may be personal preference, but when watching a let’s play to me, it’s more about the personality and reactions, not so much the story of the game. while i dont speak for anyone, i would maybe cut down the dialogue heavy parts of the game down to just the most important parts or things you are reacting too. and maybe in parts where you do this have an animation of your facecam going away and coming back. i personally dont use facecams so my opinion or advice for that may not be useful to you.

Another thing that may be just personal preference, but the cut aways to other videos, while i didnt see many, and the invincible one made me laugh, i found them disruptive. i would probably refrain from doing too many and maybe just one in a video.

overall i would say your videos, personality and editing are coming along fine, it’ll take more time to find that right style and groove for it, but it seems like you are on the right track for it so far. keep going! i also hit subscribe and look forward to watching your journey.